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Review Detail of Cosplayqueen in The Birthday Of a Special Stranger

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Cosplayqueen
CosplayqueenLv35yrCosplayqueen

The storyline had potential and the characters were showing a decent amount of growth, but the dialogue between characters is awkward. Other moments and internal thoughts are cringy and at times uncomfortable to read . Story had potential but due to linguistic choices I am not continuing the story further

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The Birthday Of a Special Stranger

Miss_Romance

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Miss_Romance
Miss_RomanceAuthorMiss_Romance

Thanks for your feedback ! Well the aim of this webnovel is to be turned into a comic n that's why there are dialogues between characters. Also there are no internal thoughts in the story, I guess u have only read the first chapters in which there is only one internal thought which is that of Edward (the mc). Bottom line, thanks again for your review and for your opinion ! Much love ❤ #Author

5yr
Miss_Romance
Miss_RomanceAuthorMiss_Romance

Thanks for your feedback ! Well the aim of this webnovel is to be turned into a comic n that's why there are dialogues between characters. Also there are no internal thoughts in the story, I guess u have only read the first chapters in which there is only one internal thought which is that of Edward (the mc). Bottom line, thanks again for your review and for your opinion ! Much love ❤ #Author

5yr
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