Author here! 👋
REVIEW:
1- STORY:
I guess the story is going to take some time in order to finish it, and I generally write gradually. I have an idea in mind, and then I write it down, enhance it, and then integrate it into the story. Note that that doesn't mean I am writing whatever comes to mind. I have an already established idea, but the route or path that would be taken to reach that idea is still being discovered. I generally try to pay attention to comedy, believing that it is one of the reasons readers would fall head over heels for any novel. I assure you that the story will have: Plot twists, action, tear-jerkers, mind games, and whatever devious and mischievous villainy you think of, i.e., torture, manipulation, manslaughter, etc. I also want to try and add a bit of wisdom that the reader could take from my book.
I will try my darnest to avoid: plot armour, plot convenience, plot holes, and any illogical miracle that would happen in the story without me explaining it some way or another in the story.
As for romance, it is in my plan, but there will be no harems, at least for the main characters, so don't come expecting bajillions of women to literally "come" for the main cast.
As for systems, they are cliche, and the main characters will have no system, although my ideas contain the usage of systems, but in another way, they are extremely different from the norm.
2- CHARACTERS:
Every character is a representation of something, and that "something" could be deduced from his name, habits, feats, or way of speaking in the novel, although you may need to analyse them a bit more because some characters tend to flip their mindsets and behaviours. I am not a fan of one-dimensional self-insert characters, and I also am not a fan of slaughtering good characters just for "plot convenience" or for the sake of the main cast. On the point of the characters being a representation of something that doesn't mean that something is their whole personality per se, I will try to make them as realistic as possible.
3- POWERS:
We use Ru in here, which is a power system I created. At the start of the story, I am still sketching and making preliminary draughts for the way it will work, and once I settle on one of those draughts, I will make sure that it is as clear for you, dear reader, as it is for me. But currently, the Ru is partially explained, but what may change in the future are the power levels and the boundaries of each power level.
4-UPDATES:
I am not that free, unfortunately, so currently I can write one chapter in 1–2 days, so until I find a way to write faster, That is all the content that there will be.
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Anyways, I hope you enjoy reading my story as much as I enjoy writing it. If you like it, drop a review or maybe a comment too. It fuels my motivation for real. Have a great day!
