First chapter online

The novel is called Moon Wanderer. I couldn't come up with anything better. I did however, manage to increase the word count. I also edited it, but I think I messed up the tenses.

I did mention how I didn't like the 'feel' of it. So I somehow managed to somewhat fix it.

I'm writing in the 1st perspective. I will write other POVs as well (needed). I'll see and try to experiment. Maybe I'll move to the 3rd perspective later on.

Let me know where I could improve and/or fix something. Just don't bully me too much.

P.S. the cover is a concept art of Kenshi 2.