evolx24
It was a good beginning. 😃 The synopsis is short but catchy. There are a little grammar mistakes as the author has also told but for me it didn't disrupt the overall flow. You can use Grammarly tool for editing. The narrative is well done and I also found myself feeling the MC's pain 😞 Only sometimes I felt the change in scene a bit abrupt. But overall an engaging story with an interesting plotline. 😁 Keep it up! 👍
There are five chapters currently. The writing quality ain't bad. I have not detected any misspelled vocabularies or terms. As for the plot, it seems interesting to me, especially in the third chapter. That really hooked me up. As for the characters, they seem to be described in a genuine manner so that the readers can easily portray them. There are paragraphs that seem long but hey, I'm still giving it five stars since its not a major error. Keep up the good work author!!!