It was a good beginning. 😃 The synopsis is short but catchy. There are a little grammar mistakes as the author has also told but for me it didn't disrupt the overall flow. You can use Grammarly tool for editing. The narrative is well done and I also found myself feeling the MC's pain 😞 Only sometimes I felt the change in scene a bit abrupt. But overall an engaging story with an interesting plotline. 😁 Keep it up! 👍
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