Reviews of The Adventure
The Adventure
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The MC is an average joe and as for the plot I can't say because I have not read that far. So far nothing that happens in the chapters seems out of place, good flow. And the dialogue gives me an almost clear picture of what type of people he characters are. The action scenes were pretty solid and I could have said more if I wasn't such a slow reader. T_T
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I'm honestly at a loss for words as to why this novel is sitting at 7 power stones. It jumps right into a great action scene with good flow, dialogue, and pacing. It keeps that momentum for a dozen chapters so far with no signs of falling off the rails. The story is clean, following our MC and written VERY well in a crisp no nonsense style.
