Unknown (OLD)

I sat on the chair watching the two sides (Demons and Angles, Insectoids, Phantoms) and I take popcorn and started eating it.

It started

Angles started attacking the lesser demons and insectoids started attacking the primordials. Phantoms are not joining the war as they are watching it. I ignored them and started watching the war.

Everything is going according to the prediction but something is not right as Angles have not attacked seriously and it seems like they have a backup. I have a bad feeling and I was about to ask Alice (Manas). A different angle approached us he is stronger than the primordials.

"You are the one who my master told me to keep in check, you are nothing more than an ant in front of real monsters .....

But my master will help you to know who--"Angles words are cut when a hand land on his shoulder and he patted it. He without turning back bowed his head and teleported away. I saw the man who came had calming aura similar to normal humans but I have a gut feeling that he was stronger than me, which makes no sense as I am stronger in this universe and I have the ability to devour the universes with a single skill.

"How have you been lately," he asked

I stared at him for a few seconds and I don't remember him anywhere as I have so many questions 'who is he' or 'why did he talk to me like he knows me and other questions but I kept the questions in my mind and stared at him like I don't know him.

"Well it doesn't matter and you will have to face yourself as you are not able to know your place and your origin and I will help you to know it yourself," he said and

He came in front of me and touched my forehead and I was knocked unconscious.

The last thing he said to me was to become strong, I was weak and I closed my eyes and fell to the ground.

-----------------------------------------------

well I changed my story

and give me some ideas to improve my story

and tell me if my writing is good and how to improve

and how was this chapter

good

or

not

Enjoy it