NieLie
I know the total score is just 3.8, but I rate as honestly as I could and I still think highly of this fanfiction WQ 5/5 - The grammar is good. Copy/pasting is fine as long as the story is good. SD 5/5 - I like where this is going. CD 5/5 - Nice. UP 1/5 - You know why. WB 3/5 - This is how I usually rate TDG and its fanfics' and novels and fanfics' world background.
Okay, for this fanfiction. I will keep tabs and converse with my readers so don't be shy to comment and advice all you want, also the release frequency of this novel is erratic, sometimes it'll be fast, sometimes slow. So please understand, it's because I'm working in a callcenter that I don't have a definite schedule.