Vighnesh_93
You actually let your fans down for profit you could have just made a patreon and moust of us whould donate for you but u just had to be greedy.. well not my problem anymore ill just black list you. Fuck reading your novels when you do this to people who vote daily and always folowed your novel since day one. Biggest disapointment after brexit and donald trump
It's really funny that when my novel went normal most of them didn't even bother to review and now when I got him came flying like a fly and flood the reviews. Does it feels good to de-rate someone. There was a saying that a coward only hits a dead snake to feel empowered. Looking at you I feel that way.
Its funny how the cover of this novel in amazon says "300.000 reader in webnovel". lol Even though there is 300k readers, the future reader will have to start to read at ch 43?? I wonder if that 300k will still raise knowing that the novel that they are reading will have to start at that chapter... But is it really necessary to shout out loud in the cover that it has 300k readers..? If it is really that good the word will spread even without blatantly saying that is has that kind of number of readers because for a novel... that is really small number of reader y'know?
This novel is legit amazing. Comedy, character development, fast pace. The only thing which would make this novel more amazing would be to no include a harem. SPOLIER - Currently the has a OP wife, if this were to turn into a harem you know their relationship development would become slow run of the mill novel relationship. If the MC were to stay loyal to his wife I just feel like the story would progress better
Tl:DR C+, Has potential, take a binge when it hits 75 chapters or so to see how it develops. The Good: the same old good rpg system in a cultivation world concept with a solid twist. The basic premise of this novel is well thought out and the author has spent some time to flush it out in the chapters. The Meh: like many others in its category the novel needs an editor. In its current form the novel reads like it was written by a high school freshman. I understand that the author is not a native English speaker, so kudos to you friend for putting the effort into this work, but you have lots of room to improve. Look at Once a Human, Now a Paracite as proof that improvement is possible. God speed. The Bad: the adage of "show, don't tell" went out the window. The pacing of the naritive needs improvement and the ******* and release cycle might as well not exist. In its current form reading this novel is interesting but unsatisfying.
author fckd up there feelsbadman BUT this morning i was still thinking it was not a smart move and not worth at all but that was all i have to say that u guys are probably mentally destroying him like " greed " ? Why don't I see this so called greed ? the author just didn't think of the consequence and made that move to fast, opening a patreon could have made him earn way more and to cut all possible future readers from coming. how can u even say he was greedy ? and even if he was i dont think flaming him that much can be any usefull never understood why ppl flame authors who stopped writting as if they owed u something lmao, i just say unlucky and tell them gl for their future btw this case is not comparable to baisiwa's case