Reviews of Surviving on another Planet (BL)
Surviving on another Planet (BL)
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A story that fulfills all of one's most basic needs! Adventure, monster hunting, papapapa, and delicious foods. Do you know how much I found myself salivating while reading!? So many yummy things are described ughhhhh. Seriously though, the writing is very clear and easy to read. There are little grammar mistakes to nitpick so no need to worry about that! The character interactions are cute, their personalities distinct and contrast each other wonderfully. There's plenty of fun adventures and monster-hunting and yummy yummy cooking. Do you even understand how hungry I feel right now!? Please just read the story already, I'm going to go order some take out.
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Yes this the author here reviewing her own book. Anyway, it is a sci-fi adventure where the ML is a clingy bastard and the MC has face paralysis. They are a reversible couple who will go through many adventures and * positions, near-death situations until one day conquering the universe. 1.) they try to cook and eat anything that moves 2.) ML is shameless and horny 3.) MC grows from weak to strong the eNd
I really like the idea of your book and how it's super different from most ideas for this contest. I really enjoyed reading all about the space parts and learning about this world. Your a great author, keep up the good work π I would say though that your chapters are a little long and you could probobly cut them in half and be able to upload more chapters that way. It's also better for people to read shorter chapters in between times when they have free time or whatever. But that's really the only critique I have.
Such an amazing story! An interesting new universe where technology meets primitive! The MC growing to adapt to this strange new world alongside his protector, where something possibly romantic stirs? Sign me up! Amazing world building and realistic characters, personalities, desires, and goals! A must read! Make sure to read it today!