Review Detail of Writer_JJ in Surviving on another Planet (BL)

I really like the idea of your book and how it's super different from most ideas for this contest. I really enjoyed reading all about the space parts and learning about this world. Your a great author, keep up the good work 👍 I would say though that your chapters are a little long and you could probobly cut them in half and be able to upload more chapters that way. It's also better for people to read shorter chapters in between times when they have free time or whatever. But that's really the only critique I have.