A miss hap/ chapter 2

in the box it said " would you like to go to another world".

Without thinking John says ...What.

As John stood there in disbelieve he's not saying or thinking anything for a couple seconds, then only one word came to his head, yes, and as he though that, he disappeared. leaving not even a speck of dust behind, there was no sound and no smell, not even the smell of mint shower gel from when he had his shower a little bit before, when he vanished, it was like, he was a ghost.

When Jake, Hanna , Luke and Jessica seen John just vanish right in front of there eyes they were shocked, flabbergasted, shook to the core, and all that jazz, not to sure if they were actually dreaming this. This can't actually be happening they all thought expert john he is of course no longer there, this is quite obvious very hard to believe but it is not a dream and that is truly horrific as John is no longer with them his mother and farther and his beloved two cats he will never see then again, and he could not even say a proper good bye to them or even his friends just because of a single word... yes.

Now with John, who has just disappeared from his world he is now seeing a black void at this time… just him, nothing to stand on, no wind, no sound, no light just darkness and that yellow screen in his face… well were his face should be, it seems like his body has actually disappeared. if you were to actually look at or even be able to see into this black void John is in right now, you would only see a small white orb with a small thing on top of it( like the souls from soul eater)

it seems Like we are no longer able to see the thought of john what so ever, so it seem like I will have to describe what is happening to you lot so here we go then…

when you look I front of this white orb or soul you would be able to see a yellow box with white writing within it starting {you have accepted, you are now being transported to another world please be patient this will take a couple seconds.}

Time before arrival into the city of beginning in the world of Avalon 0:10 second

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This does not seem good I will continue to write what I am seeing for you lot let's hope it gets better for are main character John

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…{an error has accrued contacting the system maker}

{maker is typing…. …. … }

{ maker: well this was not Meant to happen, sorry about this lad, I will do my best to fix this, but apparently my apprentice has accidentally added a broken system into the selection process and you were the one who got it}

{maker: I apologize for this miss hap and will do something about this for you just be patient lad}

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{maker: well it seems like we cannot get rid of this broken system as it has attacked to your soul so if we got rid of it it would eradicate you from existence and I assume you do not want that so I will provide something for you}

Well, this is interesting, isn't it, let's hope John gets some great compensation for this like some amazing SSS or even EX skill or weapon or something like that or maybe something like 99999999 skill points or something

Well, when we wait for the Amazing compensation are main character will get I will talk to you about myself quickly, so we don't miss his cool and overpowered ability, so I am so thing called a gods narrator I am one of many, I am a narrator that narrates story's for people who are in different universes like all of you and help writers write about worlds and so on, you must of seem at least one of my kind as you have read something before i assume so ye that all really I can do, oh oh I need to get back to narrating

{maker: … well, that's what you have gotten I hope this is good enough for you as I need to punish my apprentice for making a mistake, I hope you arrive on the starter world and good luck on your adventure lad, and I hope you like what I have given you }

Well, oops sorry you lot it seems I talked to much so ummm ye I don't really get to interact with you people very often so I sort of got carried away and I assume this won't happen very often so I just wanted to talk, sorry for ruining the story for you lot, all I can say about what he got was it is something to do with exp and something else I'm not sure what it is as he called it a extra part, whatever that means, anyway, I'm going to go and continue to narrate for you so let see what happens now shall we

As John gets his gift/compensation he suddenly start flying extremely fast somewhere within this darkness and after around 20- 30 minutes John can see some form of tinted light, the colour is slightly red at the center and become white near the ends and as we start seeing johns soul heading towards this tinted light in the distant he starts growing a torso but at the moment it seems to be plain, as in, nothing is on it, sort of like a Mannequin. soon after, his arms, legs, feet hands and head appear but again with no real features only outlines, and as he is just about to reach the tinted light he suddenly get a burst of colour like paint being splashed onto it, and it slowly start to move over his body providing him with pale skin colour a black halo top and joggers with some red and black trainers, but their is something wrong his body is different it's more in shape, it's more lean with well defined muscle…. …. Then it sort of bloats a tiny bit going back to his normal shape he had before. He hits the tinted light and goes through it into a new land , the new world, let's see what happens in this new adventure, onward, to the next chapter.

(Just to make sure People know this is his body being remade around is soul and when it gain colour it because flesh and blood like normal it was like a mold, making sure it would be correct but it also seems like things have been added let's see what this does.)