BECOMING OVERPOWERED

"God?, What the hell are you talking about?"Karl said with a doubtful expression on his face

{Hmmmm, you don't seem surprised, well this makes things easier}.

Suddenly a crack appeared Infront of Karl. It started to grow bigger as if it wanted to swallow everything. It was pitch black as if it was made out of darkness itself

Karl was flabbergasted by this. He didn't actually mean his words when thought about the world actually shattering.

<Oh sh*t, I'm an atheist,hope God doesn't punish me for not believing in him >

These were the Karl's last thoughts as the darkness swallowed him whole.

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"Hmmm" A soft moan escaped his lips as Karl tried to wake himself up. His body felt so heavy that he couldn't even lift an eyebrow. It felt as if the weight of the whole world was on his shoulders.

Karl could do nothing but stay that way. Even if he wanted to, he couldn't move a muscle. Time started to fly by. After not having access to his body Karl started panicking. He never felt like this. Not even after an entire day of working out. That panic soon turned into paranoia. He started having the thoughts such as 'What if I stayed like this for the rest of my life, What if this is my punishment for not believing in God ?'.

Soon paranoia turned into a torture when his mind calmed down. After his mind settled,not having the control over his body felt like torture. It felt as if his mind was taken from his body and was trapped into a container.

After having to go through this torture. His mind was on the verge of a mental breakdown. When suddenly he felt an excruciating amount of pain coming from his finger tips. It was so painful that if under normal circumstances Karl would have bawled his eyes out.

But now he welcomed the pain. It meant that he was not dead like he thought. He didn't know his body's condition but it meant that he was alive.

Soon that pain started to spread to his arms then it started to spread through his chest and his torso.

It went all the way to his legs.

It felt like his whole body was being pricked by tiny needles at the same time. <Okay, Now maybe the pain can go away. It's becoming unbearable by the moment>.

But as if denying his request, the pain started to become more and more unbearable. Karl clenched his butt cheeks if he had any.

After what felt like eternity, the pain suddenly left his body. "Haaaaah haaaah haaaaah". Karl quickly got up and started huffing and puffing. He was panting so hard as if he had been running for a marathon.

*DING*

As if on cue a notification sound was heard in his mind. After looking up he could see that there was something on the systems semi transparent window.

[CONGRATULATIONS HOST!

YOU HAVE NOW GAINED THE ABILITY TO SENSE MANA. HOST HAS NOW UNLOCKED THE FOLLOWING SKILLS.

MANA PERCEPTION (LVL 1):

HOST CAN NOW SENSE AND FEEL THE MANA IN HIS SURROUNDINGS. THE CURRENT LIMIT OF THIS SKILL IS 200 METERS. THE MORE HOST USES THIS SKILL THE FASTER IT CAN BE UPGRADED. THE RANGE OF THE SKILL DEPENDS ON THE LEVEL OF THE HOST AND THE SKILL.

MANA FLOW(LVL 1):

HOST CAN NOW CONTROL THE FLOW OF MANA IN OTHER ORGANISMS AND CREATURES. HOST CAN USE THIS SKILL TO CONDENSE MANA AND CAN EVEN USE IT TO STOP THE FLOW ENTIRELY.

THE STRONGER THE ENTITY THE LESS EFFECT IT HAS.

COLD SENSE

HOST CAN NOW STAY UNDER CONTROL OF HIS EMOTIONS AND ALWAYS STAY CALM NO MATTER WHAT, HOST'S BATTLE SENSE WILL BE TURNED TO MAXIMUM WHEN HE IS UNDER A THREAT

BRILLIANCE (LVL MAX):

THE HOST NOW CAN NOW EASILY UNDERSTAND ALL THE CONCEPTS NO MATTER HOW DIFFICULT THEY ARE. THE HOST NOW HAS PHOTOGRAPHIC MEMORY AND IS NOW IMMUNE TO ALL DARK SPELLS UNDER TIER 9.

CONGRATULATIONS HOST! YOU HAVE GAINED THE TITLE:

(HE WHO TRANSCENDS THROUGH DIMENSIONS)

WHEN THE TITLE IS IN USE ALL THE DAMAGE DEALT BY DIMENSION SKILLS WILL BE INCREASED BY 200%. HOST IS NOW SAFE FROM ALL THE DIMENSION SKILLS IF THE OPPONENT IS EQUAL TO THE HOST IN STRENGTH]

[SINCE THE HOST HAS EXPERIENCED A MAJOR BREAKTHROUGH. SYSTEM IS NOW GOING TO REBOOT TO UNLOCK ALL ITS FUNCTIONS. ]

Karl only had two words to describe what he had read on the semi transparent window. <Absolutely fantastic>.

<It turned out to be exactly how I wanted it to be. A system only I can see, overpowered abilities and now I'm going to get more according to the system>

"WHERES THE CLICHE NAME OR SOMETHING?, ISN'T THAT WHAT'S SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN?, THE SYSTEM HAVING A CLICHE NAME".

<According to the all the novels I have read in my world, that is assuming I'm in another world or in another dimension, let's just hope my fears don't come true> Karl thought with a deep worry In his heart

AUTHOR: Comment below what abilities you want me to give to the mc. I want to avoid plagiarism and want to be more original so I want you guys to give me some of your ideas that I can add in here