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New Review From The Author I don't know how many might read this, anyway this review is basically going to tell you about what the novel is truly about as I've finally found my right direction in writing this story as a newbie. The novel depicts main character's interesting journey mixed with pyschological elements of how MC is developing. The story isn't repetitive, I always try to not make the story repetitive. There are grammar mistakes for sure. This is a novel I just had an idea about and wanted to write. I never thought from reader's perspective, so you know. Story's release is slow(minimum, one chapter per week), this is done to just pass my time, that's why. I already have various idea of where to stop this novel. For now, it's probably after war arc. I believe by then, I had enough experience writing this story.
I'll give the rating 5 Star . First of all ,go easy on not using better words or the typos since I'm a newbie . You can advice me on what to edit in the chapter comments. All right , now let me talk about my novel . My Novel is fantasy based novel that's set on sci-fi background . As the story progress ,sci-fi setting will be unraveled slowly. As for my MC , well it's complicated . MC loves his parents and wanted to free his sister and himself along with his race . But after he awakened his hidden talent , his personality will change slowly . I can't say more as that's a surprise. For now, MC will increase his power to ascend such that he can have enough status to communicate with the organisation that controls the land his race lived on. This is just the basic stuff . Plot will only get complicated once he ascends . Until then, you will get to enjoy his rise to power. He will be prideful(shameless pride) and badass when he makes a move. Hope you enjoy it .
Nice job in writing this novel my friend . There are grammar mistakes but it's okay. Unless you've a editor it's going to be very difficult . Anyway I liked this novel , but this is just beginning . I can only know your novel's potential if more chapters are released. All I understood you have great ambition