Otaku_123
I just stard reading but alread fells some emotion conection with this one so wull give a 5 stars cause a great One Piece fanfic should be able to evoke strong emotions in the reader. Whether it's joy, sadness, excitement, or fear, the best fanfics can create a powerful emotional connection with their readers.
I finally catched up! Amazing fanfic. Please keep this up and be proud of your work because it's really good. Also this is already good, and this is just a suggestion but can you please add in just a speck of romance for Rin? It doesn't have to change anything in the story/plot. Just to like, appeal female viewers such as myself.
Not a great, but a good fiction nonetheless 👍 But I would like more structure, the system is ... Whimsical. I still don't understand how can mc afford a devil fruit... At best she earned 1mln berry, but a simple paramecia is 100 mln berry, not to mention logia. Mc is also a moron for... forgetting she has a system... And even then she doesn't use it fully... Adding a twin to the mix is.. bs. Just add her from the very beginning if you want... As for tomas... I only have one problem with him. He doesn't have a body... On the other hand you have a mc with devil fruit that can grant him his body... Why did you make Tomas cheat from the very beginning by giving him the ability to create his own body?... By your logic he then can also recreate Kado body and possess it. Author - stop cheating! You have to follow the rules of the world!