Reviews of SUCCESSOR OF THE VERSE

I asked if mc will continue to follow Luffy until raftel becomes the ultimate goal of the pirate king? I don't mean to be rude and disrespectful, but I have to say this. if my words offend you I'm sorry but I have to be honest to review your novel. Spoiler !!! Mc was given a system from the god of the universe to be his successor and when he entered the world he only followed Luffy as vice-captain. (The funny thing is, the MC trained for 5 months only to see Zoro and Luffy come to the city of shells to join as vice-captain of Luffy. In the end your MC novel is a nanny, congrats !!!) This meant there was no point in having more power if he couldn't find the plot or change it himself. (Remember the adage "With great power comes great responsibility.") And I believe when the MC travels to another world he will be the MC's nanny and observing the environment from MC onwards is always like that. Come on bro, did you make a chapter per novel just to highlight the characters Luffy and MC become side characters who only come when needed and discarded when not needed. To be honest in reading your story at first I expected good things but sorry it didn't go my way. {My suggestion is that if you just wanted to write this novel without your own plot on the webnovel from the reader's point of view, you'd be sure to get insulted if not now maybe later. Because I've seen many writers on webnovel cause readers to comment badly which results in writers quitting writing. I suggest you write on fanfiction.net or wattpad for a lot of friendly readers.}

Hurm. I have read a few chapter and I can assured all of you that love OPness that this is not for you. OP Mc is not the right word, but more like author Nerf him by not using his full potential? This story told you about a ROB that create omniverse and he got bored and want a son to take over his job for whatever job a ROB do. He give Mc full freedom with all stuff in his system free. FREE!!!! And he didn't abuse it because some plot armor form author said "This is a test for you from your omnipotent dad to see what you do with unlimited power in your hand... ".. And then he buy swordsmanship and marksmanship and swing it thousand of time like recruit training. So you all can guess the nonsense in here.. This is not me throwing sh1t to author face. No. This is me describing the story. Feel free to read the story if you didn't believe me.

The character is well done and the story development is smooth. Other than following the plot the story has been written nicely till now. I can't say about the future but the story is enjoyable for now.