Skykritze
Dont bother reading this its too plastic, alot of plotholes everywhere, interactions are awkward and 2 dimensional. He literally spams chidori as a 7 year old to practice like wtf, no explanation on his stats nothing... Stay away! ....................sshehdhdhddhdddjdddjddjjddjdjjddjdjdjdjddjdjdjfjfjfjjffjjfjfffjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdddjdjddjjddjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjddddjdjddjjdddjdjdjddjddjdjdjdjdjdmmmmmmmmmj
ignore the criticisms that give the fic a bad score, the fic is incredible and apparently they will have to put a manual to learn how to make reviews because those who complain about the fic did not even see it, they saw that the name of the protagonist in their world was Chinese and they already give a bad review, in short people who do not know how to give reviews
I had high hopes when I first stumble upon this fanfic. Only to be hit with the disappointment right away. Here I thought I would find things that will capture me as a reader. But it turned me away instead and made me write a review against it. This fanfic is a Naruto Chinese Novel hybrid. Basically, Chinese level "comedy", interaction, and anything Chinese related that you could find in a Chinese Novel. I am not hating on the Chinese Novel. I like reading them. But for the author to implement it on a childhood memory of mine, not to make it better but to make it worse is just a no, no, to me. Well, this is my opinion don't judge it base on my review try reading it first. and judge it yourself.
Nice fiction I suggest that you should focus more on making this harem building is with real relationships with slowly build up romantic Each girl need her time alone with mc... ... Suggestions for harem is Tsunade seju Kushina Uzumaki Mikoto Uchiha Konan (the angel) Pakura (my suggestion Mc should save her life) ....... I advice you that Uchiha clan and Uzumaki clan should be saved ...... Don't join Akatsuki nor keeping Becomeing konoha pawn may be temporary work under hokage until he is strong enough to stand alone Instead of joining Akatsuki Mc could safe Uzumaki clan when no one help it Mc under Uchiha flag dispatched to help them then create a branch for Uchiha clan in Uzumaki clan... If Mc were to leave konoha he could go there Or Lead the Konoha police force and strengthen it and take in members from others clans... ...
Very good I give it a 5 star but the hand is that the prota complains that it does not have too many chuzos range s[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]