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it's hard to find non-smut op mc fueled storys now and days people be hating the weak to strong genre. good so far that i have read. needs abit more character growth but over all its better then most novels on this website now and days. the grammar is good the love interests dont fall for him immedetly. show's character's that aren't cardboard cutout's personality wise. only problem i have with it is to many training montage time skips other then that its a pretty good.
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2nd review: I really like the story, the plot is satisfaying and exciting. I like that it focuses a bit more on romance, feelings and slice of life. And while the grammar isnt the best, the story doesnt get downgraded by it at all. MC has to face realistic hardships (like emotional ones) instead of your typical fanfic wishfulfillment MC, who get everything theown in his face on super easy mode..... --> Great Idea and Storyβ€π