Stopped...

I am unsure of why you remade the novel again. I rather liked the start of the second iteration, what caused you to change your mind and make a new version of the story? Just because a few people did not like the start? You make the story you want to, not what others want, for you are the writer.

read it till the end 119 before author decided he/she made some mistakes he/she wants to rectife by rewriting the story. if i can take my opinion from the last try decent read but you have to love the game element -system element- of it