My Thoughts
[A/N: I am surprised why Danzo never used Kotoamatsukami on Hiruzen. Why is that?
I am thinking of translating/editing one of my favorite Naruto fanfiction from MTL. I think it should improve my writing as I am editing. What do you think? Don't worry, I am not losing motivation writing this novel or anything. I'll still upload at least once a day. But I will also upload the other translated story too.
I am surprised not many liked or commented picture of Kurenai in the "Harem Poll" chapter. She is one of my favorites; she trains her students diligently. AND she is gorgeous. Some people may think Oh, her student are all weak; well, I think she couldn't teach properly because one, she is weak in anything except Genjutsu, and two, her students were clan kids, so she was heavily restricted. However, with proper guidance, she could be one of the strongest in Genjutsu. So, of course, I will give her "proper guidance."
For many other people who were worried about babysitting other kids, don't worry; he won't do that. He will only guide his loyal people at a minimal level since he wants his people to get strong by themselves. But, of course, the harem member will have more benefits.
Tell me did I mess up in any of my chapters?
Do you want me to add any more harem members? they have to be useful to MC
Any tips on my writing
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