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Reviews of Star Wars: Dusk and Dawn [discontinued]

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Star Wars: Dusk and Dawn [discontinued]

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FlashyAli
FlashyAliLv13FlashyAli

This novel is probably in my top 10 Star Wars fanfics. I really enjoy the story and the fact that you made the story happen during the original trilogy era. I don’t know if it was just the ones that I read or if there really isn’t a lot of them. 95% of Star Wars fanfics that I read either happened during the clone wars era or the old republic era. It’s really refreshing for me to find a novel not during those times. The character of Emmet is someone that I can see myself in if I was in his situation. Good job and keep up the good work!

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RackOfLife
RackOfLifeLv15RackOfLife

This story is interesting there aren't many star wars fanfics out there but i got to say this one stands out give it a chance and im sure you'd love it.

Dragonlord007
Dragonlord007Lv14Dragonlord007

Honestly ur doing pretty good with the book so far and I'm loving it for the star wars and how the chars are interacting keep up the good work man.............

A_Canadian
A_CanadianLv11A_Canadian

Reveal spoiler

Landon_Sorenson
Landon_SorensonLv4Landon_Sorenson

We all need Star Wars fan fics and such they just make this platform this place the internet a better place just ahh man it is nice to have anyway

Kamina_123
Kamina_123Lv3Kamina_123

Love this veru creative and interestong. I like the path that this has taken. Cant wait to fond out what happens next. Thanks for this greay fan fic

Saberswordguy
SaberswordguyLv5Saberswordguy

Good luck author 😊

Nicolas_Sanchez
Nicolas_SanchezLv4Nicolas_Sanchez

Nice job keep it up 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😊🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢🐢

Emmett_Lauhoff
Emmett_LauhoffLv2Emmett_Lauhoff

I felt like this needed another review, the story seems alright so far, but I don't understand the MC's personality. Your doing a good job, I hope the story pans out.

Emmett_Lauhoff
Emmett_LauhoffLv2Emmett_Lauhoff

it seems that the writing was really took up a notch after the rewrite, with more detail and it took out elements that are just a hindrance to the story. all in all, it's much better so far, good job. The MC has my name

6ix6ix
6ix6ixLv56ix6ix

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BattyGoody
BattyGoodyLv13BattyGoody

Bblbbbbblblgkcjfjdhdmdgsgnstjsmysgnndhgdbdjfvdhdbfbfdndigggbdndidbdbhxndkdndbdhdndjdkbrhdnddkdbbdhd dgmd Pretty good for a newbie....,.... If you drop I will kill you

BrotherJ
BrotherJLv5BrotherJ

So to start off i should say that the chapters are short but the author makes up for that with a faster realise rate. Second he makes very few mistakes grammar wise making the chapter easier to read. Lastly the way he just made obi won casually accept the MC joining them might not sit well with some people I found it quite comical.

Ediimon
EdiimonLv5Ediimon

This **** is prettttttyyyyy goooodd This **** is prettttttyyyyy goooodd This **** is prettttttyyyyy gooooddThis **** is prettttttyyyyy gooooddThis **** is prettttttyyyyy gooooddThis **** is prettttttyyyyy gooooddThis **** is prettttttyyyyy goooodd

Steven_Beck
Steven_BeckLv5Steven_Beck

This book is really good so much that I can’t put it down so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you πŸ™πŸ“–πŸ™πŸ“–

shady_elf
shady_elfAuthorshady_elf

I sense a low amount of reviews................ I like cheese cake, do any of you reading like cheese cake? I like The Beatles Help, I need somebody Help, not just anybody Help, you know I need someone, help When I was younger, so much younger than today I never needed anybody's help in any way But now these days are gone, I'm not so self assured Now I find I've changed my mind and opened up the doors Help me if you can, I'm feeling down And I do appreciate you being round Help me get my feet back on the ground Won't you please, please help me And now my life has changed in oh so many ways My independence seems to vanish in the haze But every now and then I feel so insecure I know that I just need you like I've never done before Help me if you can, I'm feeling down And I do appreciate you being round Help me get my feet back on the ground Won't you please, please help me When I…

shady_elf
shady_elfAuthorshady_elf

Now I'm just being shameless, giving myself five stars. Like i've said I'm open to feedback and suggestions................................................................... ..........................so... Yeah