shady_elf
This novel is probably in my top 10 Star Wars fanfics. I really enjoy the story and the fact that you made the story happen during the original trilogy era. I donβt know if it was just the ones that I read or if there really isnβt a lot of them. 95% of Star Wars fanfics that I read either happened during the clone wars era or the old republic era. Itβs really refreshing for me to find a novel not during those times. The character of Emmet is someone that I can see myself in if I was in his situation. Good job and keep up the good work!
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So to start off i should say that the chapters are short but the author makes up for that with a faster realise rate. Second he makes very few mistakes grammar wise making the chapter easier to read. Lastly the way he just made obi won casually accept the MC joining them might not sit well with some people I found it quite comical.
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