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(more longer) is incorrect in this case, i would suggest saying (more chapters) or just (longer.) keep up the good work Author san.
it's already bad that he is a foul mouthed perverted kid. At least make him loyal. So no harem.
Hey Author san, thank you for the hard work. I however have a little trouble reading the chapters though due to the pronouns not adding up. You sometimes use she and her when it is a guy speaking or he and his when it is a woman. Also it would probably be best to just say Peter, not brunette or chestnut so people don't get confused.
I would say restart it. It would be hard to continue the story when the plot and characters are not yours.