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Shinkaio_Genesis
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A Cool story so far with good mc. Just don't soften up the mc just to appease some pussy idiots. The mc has trust issues and such thing as 'morals' shouldn't stop him putting seals and other precautions. After all, you wrote his past background like this. I hate it when writers write mc backstory as some tough badass mother fu*ker but then he acts like a bi*ch and restricts himself and allows everyone walks over him because apparently he is 'CHANGED' LOL!
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it would be interesting, if he has a wife from each clan, imagine all his children the originals of the canon, while the avansa, getting involved, when the canon begins, that he follows his children, in passing helps them, while he spends time with his wives, and layers have more children, so many ideas there are.
So far the story is so good that it's one of my ideal type of a fanfic. Mc is fully aware of the threat of a betrayal and he has reason in doing everything. He will be OP but the story is still progressing. Not any girls could enter his eyes and i hope that he won't chase any MIL*Fs. Overall, the story has potential to get over hundreds of chapters as he chase immortality in naruto world and MC character is an ideal one. Also i hope that there isn't any stupid tragedy or cuck*ld or something that leave a bitter aftertaste.
The Mc puts essentially slave seals on 8 year old kids so they don’t “betray” him lol then he says he wants true love but still uses these seals it makes no sense.... and it’s a story that the Mc wants to tell his past life to people so if you don’t like when they do that since there isn’t a reason for it then don’t read
Thx for the new update... His black blood is super OP.... And with how the war would start in few years, it's gonna be like kids in candy store with the boss of it told them you can get any candy you want as long as you could grab it.... In his time of war, there's a lot of blood line clan that still exist, so he definitely would become OP.... And tag Obito secretly inside his blood or something to keep track of him for the eyes... And also Nagato...
Great chapter as always... This newest chapter had make me think of something.. Actually, Danzo is a good guy for me.. Why? He is someone who think of the village the most after Hiruzen, but turn cuckoo due to how Hiruzen handle him.. As the modern guy like us, he is the best guy for any boss!!! He's like spongebob who even willing to pay Mr. Crab just to work!!! Just look at how that old crab extort him yet he is willing to work there!!! Gosh, fcking stupid Hiruzen(Although plot is the one making him stupid to not using such an convenience office paperwork settling worker) for not using him to handle the paperwork and stuff and be the real boss who only handle the village destroying level of problem or else, just hanging back and have some weed...
Good Naruto fanfic that refreshingly isn't set around the animes time period as it follows the MC taking over a 8 year old Minato. Add some much needed depth to characters that were not of the main cast. I like the MC as he thinks things through and actively avoids dangerous tropes that screw over other MC characters! All in all I have greatly enjoyed it and hope for once I will see a Naruto fanfic that I enjoy be dropped! Keep up the good work author San! 😊 👍 👍 👍
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