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Silicon & Gold

Snatched up from his city-world by mega conglomeration Briareus Brands' predatory contracts, follow Lukas' adventure of being indebted to his newfound market given slaver. Will contain GSM Romance, extreme body modification, mild violence, harsh language. If any of these bother you, can't say you weren't warned. This is my first novel so please give me constructive criticism. I truly want to be able to see from the readers POV as much as possible.

PirateOzzy · Sci-fi
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8 Chs

Introduction

Hello! I'm your Storyteller Ozzie. This is my first attempt at getting my stories out there.

I'm looking forward to constructive feedback to improve my writing! That means I'd prefer you not to say: This character bad, me no like. To make me a better writer and help me understand the way my readers perceive my storytelling, tell me why the character is bad and why you don't like it.

Of course you can totally say character bad me no like! And if the general consensus is that the character, concept, scene, whatever it might be is bad I'll look into it myself. This isn't to say I'm not going to be doing that regardless. Thanks!