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Shatter the Bad Ending!

[Restore The Crown] This was the novel that I was tasked to review as a contestant for our yearly webnovel event and as someone who had to probably read hundreds of novels by now. It was utter garbage, it was full of overdone tropes and cliches that you could have seen from a mile away. A bland and mary sue protagonist ✓ A list of heroines who fall in love and become obsessed with the protagonist instantly ✓ A myriad of villains who have no other personality other than to hate and try to kill the protagonist ✓ They were all there. Except for the surprisingly catchy title, there was no other positive thing about this novel. But was pissed me off the most was the ending. With no build-up and seemingly out of nowhere, most of the heroines were killed and the world that they lived in became hell on earth. It was literally revealed in a couple of chapters and was clearly done just to shock the readers. Honestly, I wish I could restore the time I wasted reading this novel. But as I said my criticism to the author. The f*cker shot me in the head! (I proofread my chapters by myself, sadly I am only human, so if you find any mistakes, kindly point them out and I will fix them as soon as possible) (This is my first attempt at writing novels, to those who keep on reading despite the occasional mistakes here and there, I thank you from the bottom of my heart and I will promise to be a better author, anyways have a nice day and please never build galeforce on twitch, if you do, you don't deserve 8 hours of sleep, that is all, thank you)

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Dawn (3)

Ms. Rebecca continued calling other students,

Considering that there were 300 of us here, this might take a while.

I was now sitting on the wooden floor, hoping that this whole ordeal would come to an end.

"Xayah Vienna, pick a weapon,"

Here she is the 2nd heroine, her purple hair fluttered as she walked, and her fierce scarlet eyes were set upon a spear.

She soon grabbed the handle of the sharp weapon akin to her ears.

"Whoa, an elf, it's my first time seeing one,"

"Step on me please,"

I thank god that I transmigrated a month ago because If not, I would not have the strength to support my composure.

Her smile was beaming as she inspected the spear and soon made her way to Ms. Rebecca.

After getting her profession, she then winked at the students that were looking at her.

Some of them almost fainted,

I inwardly thank god again.

"Nathan Heroux, please pick a weapon"

A man soon walked, each step full of dignity.

With elegance, he grabbed a longsword from the wall.

As he took it, it was almost as if he held the handle of the weapon countless times.

He then swung it, the sheer strength could be felt in the wind.

As he inspects it with his dark eyes, a smirk left his face.

"It's decent, enough"

His voice full of nobility captured the hearts of some of the students.

As he ruffled his fingers through his rose hair.

I felt a little bit subconscious about my looks but I shook it off.

I have greater things to worry about.

After getting his profession, he soon walked back, everyone could feel the nobility emanating out of him.

"Reynold Heartsteel, please pick a weapon,"

A man gleefully walked through the wooden floor.

He had a vibrant smile as he looked at each and every weapon.

But soon, he grabbed a katana off its hinges.

His orange hair and black eyes reflected on the blade.

And as I take a sneaking glance around me,

Gwen was looking at him with interest,

Xayah on the other hand,

Was looking at me?

Shen then uttered a smile,

Oh cr*p

I quickly gaze away and inwardly curse in my mind.

I forgot she was an elf and they have great eyesights,

The selection soon continued and finally, after an hour or two, it was done.

"Alright, students, thank you for waiting, let's head to class shall we?"

*****

The classroom had countless rows ascending to the very top.

I quickly picked a chair on the highest row and sat down.

Students flocked in and not shortly after the class was full.

After every seat has been taken, Ms. Rebecca that was on the podium started speaking.

"Hello everyone, you may call me Ms. Rebecca, I will be your main teacher for the full semester, if you have any questions feel free to ask,

"No need for student introductions, as that would take more time, instead let's start with the guidelines,"

"First, if you found the academy weapons unfit for you, you are allowed to bring your own, but they are only limited to a steel blade, and as a warning, we always track the contents inside your bracelets in the academy, and we will know if you brought something that is not steel."

"Second, you are not allowed to fight with each other without requesting a duel, if you do, I will personally cut you alive,"

"Thirdly, if you're class ranking falls below 300th at the end of the semester, you will be moved to a lower division, so keep working hard."

"To those who are curious, here's the class rankings, all depending on your performance at the entrance exam,"

A holographic screen soon appeared behind Ms. Rebbeca.

[Rank 1 - Gwen Lynine]

[Rank 2 - Nathan Heroux]

[Rank 3 - Xayah Vienna]

[Rank 4 - Oliver Fairfield]

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[Rank 57 - Wyatt Greywolf]

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[Rank 112 - Reynold Heartsteel]

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[Rank 278 - Troi Leobrera]

"Well, that's all for now, I know you guys are probably starving, so let's take a short lunch break, and be back at exactly 1,"

Ms. Rebecca exited the classroom and as soon as she did.

Countless students soon flocked to Xayah and Nathan,

Some were trying to get close to Gwen, yet her cold gaze intimidated them.

But soon Nathan got up from his seat and got through the numerous students trying to talk to him.

"It's a pleasure to meet you, Gwen,"

Nathan then extended his hand,

But before he could speak any further,

"Hey Gwen, let's go grab lunch," Xayah intervened and quickly dragged Gwen out of the classroom.

I silently laugh as I could see the veins on Nathan's head pop out.

Reynold in the meantime,

Like a true protagonist was sleeping on the table, as he sat near a window.

I then gaze my eyes on a person chatting with his friends,

Wyatt Greywolf,

A sigh left my body,

He was a person I would have to kill.