OneSevenEight
Your story feel rush as it was moving to one scene to the next quickly there is a need for more details to be place in these chapter's. yet it does hold some interesting elements that I do grab my attention even if this is a love story which it normally something I read, but for this I keep in my library.
5/5 (^人^) Plot is interesting (^・o・^)ノ” Synopsis is good (=^-ω-^=) Author needs to work on the actions of characters and add more descriptions so that the reader can visualize what they are doing as speak. But I can praise the dialogues for sounding natural (ΦωΦ) Another thing, just a suggestion, you can opt to change the chapter titles, sometimes, readers look at them and they may get excited if they see some interesting titles. It depends on you, though (ノ*ФωФ)ノ Overall, a great display of imagination and creativity! Please continue, good job! (=ↀωↀ=)✧
I'm usually not a big fan of reading romance at all, totally bores me to death but this novel has some interesting concepts that make you stay interested in it. It's really very well-written and I could see it being on the feature page in the near future, it has potential to become an excellent book.