King_Of_The_Abyss
Open up! Shameless author coming through! Okay enough with the shenanigans. So the reason for me voting myself 5 stars is that I put in one year to prepare the plot of this story. I really worked so hard I missed friend gatherings and such. This is my first novel so go easy on me please. I really love the passion of writing! The novel is set in a fantasy land and follows the adventures of young Griff. The novel starts slow paced with mostly character building but if you want action this is the place as the newer chapters will pump so much adrenaline to your brain from the enthusiasm that you will be hospitalized. No, I will not pay for your hospital fees. But I’ll leave some flowers as thanks for liking the story! Please give your power stones, leave comments and reviews if you like the novel! Join the comments! Let us interact together! Your opinions are what matter.
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Griff with zero memories of his past ready to explore the nation of Kulva, sounds interesting, I am curious where his adventurous nature would lead him, the author did a great job describing the introduction and different prowesses of the nation of Kulva. Good Luck Griff and the author for this wonderful journey of achievements...
Good Read man, Completely well done and easy to the eyes, for new readers getting into things. I love the system and idea of the world u have built. A fantastic read, I will wait for more chapters to build up before i read more . otherwise i will have sleepless nights in anticapation for the next chapters. XD
There were some redundant ideas but is good. Writing is well done and simple. Easy to understand for everyone. I like it very much!!! I suggest everyone to not miss out on this novel as it is very very Very well done. I hope for more chapters before continuing my read. I dont like waiting for new ones thats why hehehe
It's a good start. Keep releasing chapters on a regular basis so you'll be able to see the results of your hard work. Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of updates 4/5 Please work on this! Story Development 4/5 The story has too few chapters so the story has not fully developed. Will come back to give a better review once you have more chapters ;) Character Design: 4/5 I can tell that you had thought hard on how to portray your character. Right now, I am just starting to get a feel on what GRIFF is like. Maybe this will get a better rating once you increase the number of chapters in your story. World Background: 5/5 I can see the premise of good world building at the start of the chapters. Will look forward for future updates!
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