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i love your fanfics and i like this idea for this fanfic also I am a bit confused in what he meant by multiple batmen memories and how did he get to the flashpoint universe as he is only a 17 version of bruce who should be travelling and training not being batman ????

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pssssssstttt............rein 👀 you forgot to update this one................. Don't know what your schedule is like but if editing is the issue, I can get that done for you

author I love your works like invincible me and the hammer effect I have huge expectations for this one as well cause most of your work is marvel universe so it's new for me seeing a DC you work oh and the Iceman to I love it but for me it's not that great but invincible me and the hammer effect is absolutely a marvelous work

If you're getting stuck writing, you need to plan it out man.Where do you want this story to go?what is the endgame?He needs a big Ambition to really keep the readers you got here and a steady supply of chapters.

people who seen the comment I highly recommend this guys fanfics.I have read his on fanfics also in fanfics.com they are great he has a plan and a story that gets intersting. not like most of the other bullshits with system and op powers the be gods in chapter one and these fics are not Mary or Graystu fics Highly recommend it

Enjoying it so far and waiting to see more chapters. Really excited for how this story is going to go. This the first batman SI that I have seen so far so I am excited to see what comes up for it. ..

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This is gold. LMAO. I need more of batshit crazy yet lovable MC. Thanks for sharing this author! Hope it all goes well, please do continue this! <3

Good.

Don’t bother checking the reviews.....just expect a great novel from him. They always are. Thanks for bringing us another ff. .............

I'mma just gonna leave this 5 star here cause it's your creation and I love you, by the way is Hammer fic dropped? . . . . . .jskwkkwkskkskwkkw

I haven’t read enough of it for a good review but I love Author-san’s other books so...

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This fic is amazing the story is very very good I thought it started kinda rushed at the start but then I found what happened. No spoilers here go read the story...

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An odd start, especially if you haven't watched the movie that it's based on but it does have interesting ideas and it is worded well so I would recommend this

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