Not a chapter - Feedback

Hey y'all, hope you enjoyed this story so far. How do y'all feel about the story so far? Do y'all have any complains(besides the obviously not the best writing style and the grammatical errors)? I know the writing style is meh, but I don't really have time to learn any "advanced"/"fancy" English words. Plot? Characters? Worldbuilding? Too fast-paced or no? Sometimes I feel like I'm rushing it as if I was making a quick summary and not bothering with details, then thinking that it could be unclear what I meant in some instanced, which could lead to unnecessary misunderstandings down the road. And sorry for the wildly irregular updates at random days and hours, the chapters are published as soon as I'm done with them, which could be any hour of any day.

Anyway, hope y'all continue enjoying the story if you already did, and if you didn't then I'm sorry for any shortcomings/not meeting your expectations. I'll appreciate any feedback you provide.