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Hey guys, some things need to be adjusted, with the release of the new episode of Kimetsu no yaiba we were able to get a sense of how strong breath users are compared to normal people, and it was much more than I expected.

Rengoku literally ran faster than a Vei Train, or rather at the speed of sound!

If we stop to think about the other feats that we will still have in the manga, breathing is something very stolen.

So I'm unsure if I should redo the fanfic because I skipped many important elements of the story, there was no character development, I didn't bond with the secondary characters and the protagonist's family with them only appearing once in a while.

The rise of her power was very fast I think, it should have pushed a little more and lacked more dialogue between the characters and I kept switching genres all the time in the middle of the story.

Isn't that an excuse to end the story one more question if you would like me to continue anyway or redo the story more neatly and with better scenes?