Eletro101
Hey there, apparently I can leave a second review! So, sadly didn't win anything in the recent WSA 2022 winners announcements but that's okay and this story'll continue for much longer with our beloved characters since we're also reaching 200 chapters! My other review has some guidelines and whatnot, so this is will be, an AMA! (Ask me anything) That is to do with the story, what's planned, anything extra about it, have you slept in the past 24hrs and all that, if you wanna ask, this will be here! I just wanna thank everyone who's reading so much! More interactions are always appreciated, comments, likes, etc. It puts a smile on my face and motivates me to write more and more; on top of the story I'm already going through in Arc 4. Gonna be some fun stuff coming up, even if the pacing is a little slower, there's a good reason for it! In any case, hope you have a good day, take care of yourself and happy readings~!
Since I can review myself, lol. Thanks for reading! Lemme just say some things. Try reading these before making criticism I suppose: _ The words and phrasings used, or things that happen aren’t mistakes. One of the tags of this book is mystery, so there are most likely no ‘accidental’ words or sentences; those are intentional. Same goes for ‘plot holes’; things that aren’t discussed or don’t come into play will probably be explored in later chapters/arcs. Also, I'm only human. So, errors can occur but I’ve triple checked from chapters 1-100 and everything should be fine. The errors would come from me updating daily, so I’ll probably fix them at a later date when I catch them but obviously I will try not to make them in the first place. _ Character decisions aren’t mistakes. This is what a character would say or do in a said situation. What you think might happen may very well differ from what I have in mind. It can mean the characters did or said something wrong, or didn't do the best possible thing; that’s the point. They’re built with flaws, goals, dreams, traits and their own experiences. Boo me, not my precious, precious characters. _ The pacing I have for this story I think fits perfectly with the story I want to tell. There are reasons for slow moments and reasons for fast ones. It does have actions scenes in it but this is not a fast-paced action novel. It's about the characters, their own developments, mysteries and their journey. _ If on the off chance you find any spelling errors or anything, comment on it, I'll fix it asap. _ And last but not least, please, please, please, have a wonderful day, stay hydrated and get enough sleep. Happy readings~
i love this story wayyy too much i reread sometimes just to experience certain chapters again. amazing story plots, amazing fleshed out characters, fantastic world building with lore behind it and would definitely recommend reading and the amount of times i physicaly reacted to some scenes its just so good. its not some overpowered mc with cheat skills, no systems with level ups, not some harem with plastic characters, its serious when it needs to be, funny when it needs to be and so wholesome which can flip to grusome. its the adventure of these characters in a foreign world that has avatar the last airbender vibes but with isekai tones. the narration sometimes gets sassy and just mocks certain things in the story making it a really fun read. by far the best thing are the characters. the main four are so entertaining to watch interact. fumekos the cutest tsundere istg , Jotou the protag whos flawed yet perfect. hotaru the moral compass. And then, my favourite main character asobi, is utter chaos in every sense of the word. the fight scenes in this are just, chef's kiss. there is not TOO many since the writing is more suited for a longterm adventure and places importance on the characters and the plot but when they happen, omg its satisfying. the little details, the way each person fights differently, you can really feel the pain when someone gets injured or the WATCH OUT feeling when someone is about to get hit. its an amazing read imo and an experience. it dips to depression and trauma and then suddenly there are ducks shooting beams of light, some gory fight scene with practical magic and elements then theres a cute wholesome yuri scene that makes my heart flutter. idk what else to say except, fantastic job.
One of my favorite stories on here. The party dynamic is fun, the characters themselves have their goofy moments but at the same time feel fully realized, and Jotou is wonderful as a protagonist. She’s flawed but can use those flaws as a strength, struggles with growth in an interesting and engaging way and it’s just wonderful how those struggles play off of the rest of the party. Plus, as a trans woman, her utter nonchalance at the genderbending tickles me. The relationships between characters is probably my favorite part of the story. The characters rib eachother to express their care and play off of eachother while still getting serious if the situation calls for it. Overall, wonderful, the story does an amazing job balancing serious and severe situations with comedic and playful ones without it seeming out of place or one overwhelming the other. I’ll immediately eating up anything this author writes, and keep up the great work.