Eletro101
Hello! I'm Eletro or Narvs, a writer who has many stories to share!
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It's almost like that's the inspiration...? Thanks for reading maybe ten chapters, making no constructive criticism to better the work and not reading the synopsis so you didn't have to waste your precious time cause you would've known this is based on isekai anime. This you in the pic? If you're looking for smutty peak fiction bs where you want characters to be slutty for your sake and written crudely, then this sort of fleshed out and proper character writing with a coherent story isn't for you sorry :) Hope you find what you're looking for out there, thanks for reading!
Or seemingly too
Thanks^^ yeah, it'd be 'seeming to already be'!
Thanks, but Hotaru takes a pause in that sentence, so the comma stays.
There’s no mistake here, it’s fine; thank you
Meko says one for six-five-two-three, say it aloud.
Thanks^^ But I try to stay consistent with the british spelling of things instead of the american
Fumeko's Dagger
Just to make you aware if you didn't know, when a paragraph is edited the comments on it get deleted, I have no control over it but thank you again!
Thank you!
Yup, it’s supposed to be Daiyu’s left is Jotou. I’m currently reworking a lot in Arc 4, 3 and a bit of 2. it shall be fixed and polished, thanks for the head’s up!
There’s quite a few things I gotta fix up in Arc 3 and I have to take the time to go through and polish a lot of it. Thanks for bringing it up though!
Yeah, I should've specified her head which does have a thick ponytail. Thanks for the input I'll correct it!