Lullabybao
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Wow, just the synopsis is very hooking! I like how complicated things in their lives. It added to its charm as a whole and the characters were naughty with the Lead. More heartwarming scenes and cuddly moments to remember. Overall a good refreshing take on the genre. Peace ✌️
The thing that really sucked is I really enjoyed this author's world they created. Especially with the inner weaving of all the characters which there are a good amount of them. But by chapter 168 the author gave up trying to make proper words and it became a scrambled mess that you could barely make out as sentences. I occasionally come back to see if they tried to update their chapters and fix them which they need. But I have little faith that they'll do that. All I can say is it's a shame.
Now here we an intriguing start to a webnovel. The protagonist is going through a bit of a rough spot, losing control of her company and then being blamed for the death of a business colleague. I was just disappointed I ran out of content to read just as the story was really finding its strides, ending on a cliffhanger. I sense a bit of a conspiracy going on and I look forward to seeing how the protagonist faces these obstacles.
Wow. I mean, most everyone else already said so much about the current story. I agree wholeheartedly, but I’d like to add, naturally. I think that the way you write the character’s personalities and dialogue just has a unique and genuine charisma to it that is so so important in a story such as this one. Congratulations, and PLEASE write more!:)