Thoughts first Book

This will be my first novel, and will take place in the world of warhammer. However I'm not as knowledgeable in what should be so be prepared for mistakes

I'm bad with grammar, and have no editor, I'm also writing on a phone however I will attempt to prevail.

This will probably be trash and just to get my Ideas out there as I can't find stories like these anywho have fun and remember always tell me how you feel about it negative and positive both are welcome however dont nag or at least add an explanation and how you would fix it.