Reviews of Reid Flannel- Rise of the Redhunter

Shameless five stars review to encourage the author. I only read the first chapter and I can tell that it's translated from another language to English, so yeah, the writing quality needs an improvement. (Words choices or diction, grammatical things) The story seems okay to me, just the flow not flowing smoothly. That's it for me, don't get discouraged and keep on improving author!

I have not actually read the story but the synopsis is not interesting. Well author many readers want the mc to have a goldfinger do if he has that you can add it to synopsis. The other thing in the synopsis is he and his friends will fight powerful entities right? But majority of readers only want the mc to stand out(Many stories have lost potential because of that or author nerfing the mc and becoming a sandbag and for me too it's dissapointingy) The best friend thing is not good too,if his bff is a girl and it is the love interest it is okay but if it is a boy then nah it's not interesting to see 1mc and another boy semi mc. Well this is your story so and I can only help a little Try to change the synopsis too because it is uninteresting (Well you can delete this after reading) The 5 stars is just for show because I don't even read it a bit

Also, I'll be starting school soon but I'll try my best to upload as much as I can, but sorry in advance for any inconsistencies. Have an awesome day/night.

shameless review. Just to thank everybody who reads it and I'll continue to improve. Add it to your ibrary if you like it. thanks a lot for checking my book out.