Review Detail of Hender in Reid Flannel- Rise of the Redhunter

Shameless five stars review to encourage the author. I only read the first chapter and I can tell that it's translated from another language to English, so yeah, the writing quality needs an improvement. (Words choices or diction, grammatical things) The story seems okay to me, just the flow not flowing smoothly. That's it for me, don't get discouraged and keep on improving author!