Miyakoysi
I like the concept and the plotting to revenge type stories. I've only read the first chapter so far and am waiting a lot more to read it all at once but I can see the actual plot from just that. False incarceration to plot revenge is original enough for me š The writing also doesn't follow the conventional writing standards but that's what gives it a bit more charm.
HERO X HIDE best ship. I love toxicity. I enjoyed the writing on this novel, the main character is so cucked I am rooting for him. He is not some peerless badass who suddenly gets blessed with plot armor and crushes all. The world around him compliments and justifies his actions. Abilities, I think they count as part of the world so I want to find out more about them especially the main characters'. If this were printed I would be nursing paper cuts because this is one hell of a page-turner. Good work and better luck to you. FIGHT ON!
The overall writing quality is good as is, it could do some polishing but it is still satisfying and easy to digest. The story development are neither too fast nor too slow and I quite like it so keep up the good work but don't push yourself. The character designs so far are good although I have questions for some but with only 4 chapters as of yet, I believe it'll be too soon to fully judge but all in all they are doing great. The world background tho, I am a bit confused as there is a lack of information about it for now but the scenes and environment building is good as is.
This is a title with riveting drama and intrigue! Thereās some very interesting plot set ups that I think have great potential to develop further. I love the loose touch on sanity and exploring some darker states of mentality in this novel. The updates might be a bit slower but Iāll guarantee itās worth the wait. Good luck author! You can do it!
Alright finally dropping a review. So first the writing is on point, the charectors are fun with personalitys beyond a single quirk, with hide being a charming shadow boi. The world is also interesting, super powered gangs is awesome and the amount of fun with the idea is a plenty. Basically If you like charector driven stories with superpowers and a charming mc this is for you.
Truth be told, I didn't know what to expect when I read this novel. I came with an open mind and saw great potential in the story. It's quite intriguing and readers would definitely want to read the following chapters, because they want to know "what would happen next." An amazing and perhaps, a twisted tale of love, mystery, and revenge, under the cover of the bloody darkness that lies between the boundaries of our imagination. Keep up the good work and more power to you author.
Reflection in the Mirror is an enthralling story of a young man with a rather twisted view of the world. You could almost call him... a villain in that way. But what else can you do when you've been betrayed by someone dear to you? Be prepared for Hyde and Jekyll vibes set in a super-powered society. Given another chance to change his life... of course he'll use it to make them pay~