Review Detail of Crowley_Black in Dtoooped

The overall writing quality is good as is, it could do some polishing but it is still satisfying and easy to digest. The story development are neither too fast nor too slow and I quite like it so keep up the good work but don't push yourself. The character designs so far are good although I have questions for some but with only 4 chapters as of yet, I believe it'll be too soon to fully judge but all in all they are doing great. The world background tho, I am a bit confused as there is a lack of information about it for now but the scenes and environment building is good as is.