Reviews of Red Dragoon

Author here. Doing a shameless promotion and review. Whoever is reading this, I hope you stay and read my story so that you may enjoy just as much as I enjoyed writing this.

Look, it's horrible. It's literally Canon story, with changes that makes it worse. Characters of issei somehow even more horrible, I mean, issei was a degenerate with golden hearth and drive for boobs, that one is just shy beta degenerate, literally drop dead in intellectual department. He somehow in ultimate class in one time and in other low-class fallen can drill him..... Yeah, that's how it works. Rias that can resurrect him, an ultimate class for a second, is jut bs beyond my Ability to take...... Sigh. In the end, if he wouldn't be so subservient degenerate, he literally lapdog for rias, same as original - yes, but I could believe original issei, that's one is just a load of crap. I don't recommend this, to someone who read original ln, maybe someone who watches anime adaptation..... I'm mean, it's already terrible you can handle some more, right?

The grammar is great, sentence structure is also great. The story itself is garbage moat think are unchanged from canon but it starts with soo much potential issei awakenes his secret gear fights also found out in later chapters his powerlvl is ultimate class soo you would think he wouldn't die from a low class fallen angel but noo he dis anyways after that he gets reincarnated as a devil goes to school rias gives him the fucking eyes as she is his master dudes just looks unsatisfied or whatever the author wrote from here i was hoping no i was begging he would show some fucking pride as a fucking dragon btw he got dragon wings and eyes and **** soo he is part dragon part human. But he doesn't when rias meets him his practically on the floor bowing down to her the story is a complete garbage especially as mc is a fucking ultimate dragon hybrid rank he practically can kill anyone in that town hell even escape but he is weak don't know how that works but the fucking nkvel is garbage don't read this if you dont like the mc to act as a beta weak character while he is the strongest there especially with his balance braker he should be on equal ground as lucifer.

Its kinda sickening that so many fanfics give Issei a power boost "op"...than they let him die to low level fallen angels...he knows about them and all yet he dies to them because author doesnt know how to make him join peerage to get harem.....could have just let him decide to ....dont know say yes to Rias??? Problem solved...whats the use of fanfic if you rewrite canon events? See where this is going ...suddenly badass and owns riser because why not? Not like Riser is low level fallen angel....the kryptonite of the red dragon emperror...silly fic this one...

So far "Chapter 12" the author is just rewriting Canon, the only difference is that Isse knows how to use the sacred gear before the canon starts, but it is still weak.

I'll give it 5... But don't drop... Ok bruhhhh...

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this book has a fresh take on dxd while still remaining true to the original characters. it is fun while also not being generic or overdone. I enjoy the fact that they gave issei more of a background rather than being just some lucky pervert

vai em português mesmo e bem bom ate agora eu vi os 30 cap e gostei de recomendar e boa sorte ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

Your writting style its good.. But the story just boring. Typical Anime Male MC chara... Naive, girl above all or easily flustred.. Not gonna be rude to you... But My english just suckass so my bad if my critism hurt you