Reviews of Reborn in the Marvel universe

Hmm implant operation you got tricked. 1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wandered why am I wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked )

Sorry so low on rating but this is very rushed with very short chapter's and not enough substance and he should not no how make or improve iron man suit makes no sense that he would and no explanation on how he new people in order to get very rare elements like Adamantium and vibranium for example. (Things coming to easy to him without no explanation how or why. Read around ch,4 at this time.)

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Seems to have been dropped what was point of starting it then. It was fast paced which since I've read or seen the films is fine. Needs more development of characters as well

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Not terrible but not that great either. Certainly near the top for this site though, so you have that going for you. Character limit Character limit Character limit

Still a new story, but it may turn out to be a great one. Give it a try and see for yourself. But its good for some light reading. ......................................................................................................................................... I will come back and renew my review when there are more chapters.

Nice story, hoping to see more of what you write, like the story and the MC, keep up the good work, I want to see what will happen next in your story :)

The story is good, the mc is smart, i like the story, its only the story are not so detailed but overall good. Thanks for the story,keep up the good work i appreciate your work, waiting for next chapter. Thanks

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Great take on a marvel world with a ability like absorbing but implementing a downgraded system. Keep up the good work, can’t wait for new chapters

great job I can't believe you are 13 I can remember reading a book when i was 13 but writing a book when I was 13 no way great job I still need to see some more world background that will make it a 5.0 but the job your doing is better than a lot of the other fanfic I see on this site keep up the good work.

good story so far i am looking forward to more should be good considering the start and also its funny the mc is from jamestown new york im born and raised there and not much happens what with roughly 30k people here

cool write more please..........................................................................................................................................................................................................