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Reborn In Mobile Legends
Onee_chan1
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Hi, author here. Some points to note for this story~ 1. There will be some backstory for certain female characters 2. I will try to give a certain trait/character to each female MC, such as Yandere/Tsundere etc 3. There will be R-18 scenes included between MC and his female camp 4. Idk how many females there will be 5. Certain timelines may not be as accurate as its kinda hard to connect it all so pls forgive me for that in advance 6. I will try to flesh out the ML world as much as possible
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Don't drop like my story, though i still haven't read it, but i know it's better than my story, yeah .. i feel ashamed because i write this review before i read it, sorry and good work π ππ» Keep writing and do not afraid about your readers comments, just take their comments to make you learn more and make your heart healthy because the cruel words they write uhahaha π€£ That's all Ciao~
the character I like to recommend for the haren : Raynare (she is a bit sadistic but she did what she did for love with azazel and also only has a superiority complex easy to eliminate, it could be like your secret operations of black operations, when you know that doing something is not the right thing in public so you do it in secret, and you could have the two that accompany it as a plus) Sona (the woman who moves her lenses xD, she is a great strategist) Tsubaki (bellesa fria) (idk she great, good swordswoman, back in beauty of sona) Aika (in the light novel she became a very good magician, but I do not remember her name, if it is not so t aika, it is that girl with glasses who was a pervert in the issei class) Murayama and katase (those two girls in the class where the trio spied, the ones with swords) Gabriel (could fix the gods system) Grayfia (good warrior maiden and ice mage) Venelana (sexy and probably could be the director of meetings and things at official parties, past noble cause) Serafall (maou, to calm the other factions, and I like their childishness, others might say that it is annoying, but that is what makes it different from others and more accessible) Ingvild leviatan (she can literally control dragons, or she joins you or you kill her, because she could literally control mc if she is strong enough) (Obviously all the MC in this world) Rias (the destructive power is Op if it is well trained, it can be mimamda, but with good "spanking" and training you can have a more pleasant "Rias") Akeno (he is a little nephilim, neither sacred or demonic elements are his weakness, sadica xD) Asia (a healer = many think that it is useless and not necessary, I say that it is the main piece in a combat. Better when it has a dragon as a companion xD) Ravel (Phoenix tears, good secretary) Xenovia (durandal> good swordswoman, just teach her common sense xD) Koneko (nekoshou devil op, they were experimenting with their sister for a reason, only sairaorg was op and I only use touki) Kuroka (same as her sister, only because of the experiments, she is no longer a pure nekomata, good choice for nobility) Rossewaise (he is one of the best magicians in valhalla, according to the light novel. Also a good secretary) Leviana reni (I don't know much about her story, because I haven't read the novel, but I do know something, because I read a few paragraphs where they put her as a good magician and that she has a "sacre gear", I don't know if it's true, but It would be good to have her as a wife and part of your nobility) yasaka (strong yokai, I have never seen her put in her nobility by any fanfic who is from xdx, she is also a good ruler, a good wife, among other things) tiamat (dragon of chaos, if you have it in your nobility, you have a powerful dragon) yubellana (from the riser phenex nobility, good magician like akeno hajima, plus the others who are in her riser phenex nobility, have their potential). ------------------------------------------------------------------------ -Here are more names of heroines from different novels: -atg (xia quinyu , *******(xing tong) , yue chan , can yue , and all the girls mentioned in the novel.) -tdg (ye ziyun , xio niger , huyan lanrou , Ye zuyin's aunt , shen xiu , etc) - "Β·strike the bloodΒ·" = (https://strike-the-blood.fandom.com/wiki/La_Folia_Rihavein). - Β·Shinmai MaΕ no KeiyakushaΒ· = (https://shinmaimaou.fandom.com/wiki/Mio_Naruse). - fairi tail = (https://fairytail.fandom.com/es/wiki/Ultear_Milkovich),(https://fairytail.fandom.com/wiki/Irene_Belserion). - naruto = kushina uzumaki and mikoto uchiha ,(https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Konan). - bleach = (https://bleach.fandom.com/wiki/Rukia_Kuchiki). - shakugan no shana = (https://shakugan.fandom.com/wiki/Shana). - one piece = (https://onepiece.fandom.com/wiki/Boa_Hancock). - fate stay nigh = (https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Saber_(Fate/stay_night)). - Rosario + Vampire = (https://rosariovampire.fandom.com/wiki/Moka_Akashiya). - soul eater = (https://souleater.fandom.com/wiki/Maka_Albarn). - nanatsu no Tazai = 'gelda' , (https://nanatsu-no-taizai.fandom.com/wiki/Merlin). - hischold of the dead = shisuka , saya ,(https://hotd.fandom.com/wiki/Saeko_Busujima) - damanchi = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/wiki/Ais_Wallenstein). - shingeki no kyojin = (https://shingeki-no-kyojin.fandom.com/wiki/Mikasa_Ackerman). - "Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei"= (https://mahouka-koukou-no-rettousei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Shiba_Miyuki). - "Β·TO LOVE RUΒ·" = (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lala_Satalin_Deviluke) , (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Momo_Belia_Deviluke). -"Β·Date a liveΒ·" = (https://date-a-live.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Characters). -Β·Trinity SevenΒ· = (https://trinity-seven.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lilith_Asami). -Β·Infinite StratosΒ·= (https://infinitestratos.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Infinite_Stratos). -Β·Sword Art OnlineΒ·= (https://swordartonline.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Sword_Art_Online). -Β·Campione!Β·= (https://thecampione.fandom.com/wiki/Campione!_Wiki). -Β·Dungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru ni Darou kaΒ· = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/es/wiki/DanMachi_Wiki). -"Β·SekireyΒ·"= (https://sekirei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Sekirei). -Β·Seirei tsukai no blade danceΒ· = (https://seirei-tsukai-no-blade-dance.fandom.com/es/wiki/Restia_Ashdoll). -(https://listas.20minutos.es/lista/mejores-animes-harem-388933/). etc
This is actually pretty great. I thought it will be a brainless fanfic but this actually has a lot of thought put into it. It's pretty good and actually gives the women have personality and feelings instead of cardboard cutouts. I'm looking forward to this fanfic as long as the author doesn't drop it.
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