shashank_bhatt
Not sure why this is so popular, nothing is happening, got some weird prisoner psycho analysis stuff going on and that's it, in 17 chapters. Doesn't even feel like someone was reborn anymore, just grant ward trying to right his wrongs, trying to get people to visit him in prison to talk to them and say sorry. Cheech back in 50 chapters to see if anything has happened.
It's not bad for time being considering author previous work. No harem or harem. I don't really care. War of horny dogs and short-sighed people is retarded. If story isn't focused on relationships, story is main priority. I don't read romance focused novels, so I despise all of those people who fight against harem. If I remember correctly there is 2 thousand years of works with monogamy domination. You can just focus on this :D 4 stars for Writing quality/ Stability of updates. Story dev. 2 stars for now. It's just slow paced fanfic in MCU. Not much happened. I might update this review if story starts to actually progress. Character design? 2 stars. I don't feel anything much from characters. At least not yet. If only MC will be different and no other unique changes. I will lower it to 1 star as it's not your creation. World? 1 star. If you don't anything unique to Marvel world. It's gonna stay as 1 star. I will come back later. Don't make this like Kenichi...
It's well written and in detail. I hope more chapters will be released. As for the love interest, I hope Skye is not included. Instead go for someone like Hellcat. She should be a good pairing with MC. Especially since she wants to get stronger too, so perhaps MC and her can grow stronger together, using his knowledge. Because if he goes for Skye, then he would eventually have to reveal to them that he can see the future, and many other Fanfics already do that. It would be like reading the same story all over again. As for Skye, I think Lincoln Campbell would be best.
I'll deffinitly reccomand this to you all. I love ward as a character so much(no homo),its quite logical from Ward's perspective. Because through all his betrayal he worked on keeping the (original) team alive.He used loopholes and interpretef orders in ways that gave them a fighting chance and someone can rightly say that this doesnt change a thing,how he murdered their friends, how he hurt them,how he broke their hearts but in his mind he did everything possible to protect them without being directly disloyal to Garret.
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This story is honestly my new favorite on this site and I can't wait for what is to come every update fill you with anticipation. There is true character development and makes you look at the show and characters in new views and understanding. This story is worth the read give it a chance and it will not disappoint.