Immortal_17
honestly the story is good and the writer is quiet talented too , but there were a some plot holes such as when the mc left to adventure he was undercover and only the guild master recognised him , and then left to slay the dragon , meanwhile Lancelot found his aura at the crime scene ( idk man black tech , helps you know the owner of the aura , how it works ? not explained ) and somehow and with no further lead he kind of went where the mc is ,how he knew his location ? not explained , saw him fighting the dragon , used a spell (he's a swordman who can use mana and divinity ,which is unbalanced) that teleports the enemy against his will from miles away , how it works ? not explained then he made a barrier that made him invincible , how it works ? not explained if you read the above you'll get my first point : only a little is explained. my second point is how inconsistent the story is , for example lancelot crossed the distance between 2 nations in a day and a half max , while in the 'castle attack' arc the duchess didn't call the Duke to come because it'll take a week ? ,i mean the distance was 20 kilometers and he was far more powerful than Lancelot so shouldn't he cross it in an 2 hours max ?
So far loving everything. Especially our MC not being stupid and immediately going for the new personality, thing. Writing Quality: So far so good, I haven't seen any particular big grammatical errors Stability of Updates: A regular update of once every second day. Which is an easy perfect score. Story Development: Haven't really read enough to say much about it but I like the build up for upcoming events and such. Character Design: Best part of the story. World Background: I have already gotten a great input of multiple different things but not a lot politically, wich is a big thing for me. So yeah, loving this so far and recommending it to anyone who loves intelligent and scheming protagonists.
the people along the protagonist are simply stupid. how can they not question his behavior. A person who used to do so many crimes suddenly became a saint. Simply stupid. And what kind of parents are they instead of being strict with their child they make a person from outside their family their heir. They could have made the second in line the heir but no they did something that no parent would do and other family members also accepted. kudos to second wife at least she spoke for her child
I must say, this novel is very enjoyable! Now now, I know that this may seem exaggerated but I think this is one of the best villain transmigration stories I have ever read! However, I really hope that the update pace would hopefully pick. But thankfully, the chapters are very long and high quality. Thanks for this enjoyable novel Author!