Review Detail of TheOnlyTrueOne in Reborn As The Villain
Review detail
So far loving everything. Especially our MC not being stupid and immediately going for the new personality, thing. Writing Quality: So far so good, I haven't seen any particular big grammatical errors Stability of Updates: A regular update of once every second day. Which is an easy perfect score. Story Development: Haven't really read enough to say much about it but I like the build up for upcoming events and such. Character Design: Best part of the story. World Background: I have already gotten a great input of multiple different things but not a lot politically, wich is a big thing for me. So yeah, loving this so far and recommending it to anyone who loves intelligent and scheming protagonists.
Reborn As The Villain
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I'm dumbfounded, intelligent and scheming protagonists? From chapter 1 to 21 all I saw is a protagonists who's always making the worst choice without minding other characters feeling nor hid own situations. For example, when he shouldn't make Lauren hate him anymore 'cause in the futur she could kill him, instead of that he keep on bullying her + being harsh with her, I don't where is the intelligent MC. I can' t count how many times MC made a bad decision thinking he won't die, it's seriously frustrating.
I reread it… and honestly I don’t really know where I was coming from, so yeah I agree. Although I still do believe that he has some understanding of what’s logical, and how he should proceed to achieve his goals. (Though with certain exceptions like the one with Laura).
Layios:I'm dumbfounded, intelligent and scheming protagonists? From chapter 1 to 21 all I saw is a protagonists who's always making the worst choice without minding other characters feeling nor hid own situations. For example, when he shouldn't make Lauren hate him anymore 'cause in the futur she could kill him, instead of that he keep on bullying her + being harsh with her, I don't where is the intelligent MC. I can' t count how many times MC made a bad decision thinking he won't die, it's seriously frustrating.