Realisation

Alright guys, before you start the criticism please remember this is my first time writing a sad/serious scene. Only had movies as a reference and this is the best I could do.

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Min-Seok sat on the couch as Joon-won bought out two glasses of water as he passed one over to Min-Seok before sitting down right beside him. He noticed Yun-Hee was already on the bed, sleeping. He noticed Min-Seok already taking a sip from the glass before placing it at the side, ready to get the conversation going. Joon-won also placed it beside without taking a sip as he also wanted to get over with the conversation soon. 

"Now tell me, Joon-won. Where did you get the money? Why did you pay for it with your money? I told you before you went into the building to call me when it is our time to pay." Min-Seok didn't even turn his head as he just continued to stare at the TV when he asked.