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Re-writing Our Love

31-years-old Terrence Li died while protecting his first love on her wedding day. To his surprised, the grim reaper let him have another chance at life by being reborn into the past and change his destiny. Now he is back in his teenage years to chase after his first love once more. With a magic notebook that can turns whatever the owner write into reality, Terrence will make sure he won't make the same mistakes in this life.

TheLonelyImmortal · Urban
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Thirteenth Date: Let's Cultivate! The Haunted Forest?

Did he just say wake up sunshine? Wait, is he's kicking me out of his part of our soul?

In a flash, Salamander has push me inside a purple portal and disappear.

I lost conscious after entering the portal. When I wake up, I saw myself laying on a hospital bed and Rebecca was sleeping with her head on my bed. Is she the one that brought me to the hospital after I fainted. Her face is so cute and innocent when she's sleeping. I reached out my hand and place it on her hands. Tears were falling down from my eyes. Could it be because she's the first person that take care of me this much when we're not related and only known each other for a couple months? I don't want this momment to end.

Rebecca slowly opened her eye and saw me looking at her with my eye's filled with tears. She hold on tight to my hand and smile with tears falling down.

"You..you finally woke up. You've been in a coma for 2 months already. The..the doctor said you would be in a coma for the rest of your life. Thank you God.", she cried.

Damn, two whole months have past just like that? It felt like there was two days. Oh no what about my homework and exams. OMG I'm going to flunk a grade if this continued. I need to leave immediately or else I would have to repeat 11th grade again.

"You don't have to worried about your homework because I've done them all for you and there weren't any exams due to a sudden fire that burn down two buildings at our school so they gave us 2 months off. Finals will be given online through the google docs that they sent you. Not just our school, but other high schools and academy also suddenly got caught on fire at the same time.", she said.

My mom say that if I find a girl who is kind, beautiful, and can understand my thought and how I think then that girl is the one I should take as my wife in this life. Looks like I found her. My future wife is Rebecca. No Terry, bad Terry, you guys are only 16 right now, you can take care of that when you are older.

Now that I thought of it, how can I a bunch of schools got burned down at the same. Its couldn't be a coincidence..unless...Dark Light is beginning their move. I need to get stronger fast. But that old geezer didn't mention where could I cultivate the Yin Qi the fastest. Come on Terry, you've been reading Wuxia manghua and watching Wuxia dramas your entired life, where is usually the place where Yin Qi gather the most? I got it! Yin Qi is related to negative emotions, regrets, and deaths so the best place to find it is somewhere haunted or filled with dead people. Graveyard? No, thats too creepy. Haunted house down the street? No, a real estate company destroyed it years ago and build a new house. Wait, I think I heard of the forest that people usually died or committ suicide in is just located a couple blocks south from the academy. I could cultivate there. I know what you guys are thinking. I think a graveyard is creepy, but I prefer a forest where people killed themselves? Well, one, there's this guy from the city that clean up the corpse there every weekend so no need of fearing zombies or dead corpse, and two, its more quiet and discrete comparing to a graveyard. But first, I need to get discharge from the hospital.

"Hey, Mei Lin, can you called the doctor here. I need to talk to him about something.", I asked.

"Sure, I'll go get him. Doctor! Doctor! my boyfriend has awoken", she replied.

In an instance, a group of medical professionals rushed into my room. Looking at their face I could tell that they are all in their 40s already. The youngest is probably 38 or so. Anyway, that's not the point. The point is why are there 20 different doctors coming to see me.

"Welcome back, Mr. Li, I'm Dr. Johnson, your Neurologist.", one began.

"Hi there young man, my name is Dr.Williams, I'm a Cardiologist.", another continue.

And they all continue introducing themselves one after another. In total, I have 5 nurses, 1 Neurologist, 1 Cardiologist, 1 pulmonologist, 1 pathologist, 1 physical therapist, 1 speech therapist, 1 occupational therapist, 1 doing a daily prostate exam, etc. You could say that I have 20 different medical professionals from each specialty in total.

"Um..am I dying?", I asked in confusion.

"No, why are you thinking that?", Dr. Johnson replied.

"Its because there's 20 different doctors from different fields staring at me right now.", I replied.

"No, no, they are just fascinating on how you woke up after just 2 months when you are supposed to be brain dead for the rest of your life due to your brain shutting because of some vitals nerves damages. How did you wake up?", Dr. Williams jumped in.

"Before the grim reaper took away my soul, I told him that I still have a family and a wife waiting for me at home so I can't die yet and punch him in the face then run.", I joked.

They all laughed in amusement, except Rebecca she said nothing and with her face all red. Well I did killed a grim reaper so it isn't a 100% lie.

"Who..who is your wife. We're still young.", Rebecca said and walked outside.

I know that joke was too much, but I could see her smile as she walked outside.

"Did I go overboard?", I asked the doctors.

They all smiled and shake their heads.

"Did she smile?"

They nodded their head.

"Do you think I should take her as my wife?"

They smiled and nodded.

"Is she beautiful?"

They all nodded

"Am I handsome?"

They smiled and shake their head.

God damn it bros, couldn't you guys at least make me happy a little bit. Girls in school rate me 9/10. How can I not be handsome? Plus I score the cutest girl in school, how can I not be handsome and awesome at the same time.

"Alright, enough joking. Time to talk business. I feel much better and I want to get discharge today.", I requested the doctors.

"Unfortunately, we can't do that right now. You might've woken up, but we still need to monitor your condition for a while longer.", Dr. Johnson replied.

"How much longer?"

"At least 6 months."

6 months, I don't have that much time left to cultivate if that happens.

"If I can lift 100 lbs of weights with just one hand then will you let me go home?"

They all looked at each other for momment then laughed.

"Hahaha, if you can even lift 50 lbs in your current status we'll let you go and there would be no hospital fees for you to pay"

"Good..its a deal..hehe.", I grinned

They asked me if I needed a walker or a wheelchair, but I refuse kindly and stand on my two feet and walk out to the garden with the doctors. We reach a big rock and one of the doctor says.

"This rock should be around 50 lbs, if you could lift this then we'll let you go."

Without hesitation I confidently put my right hand beneath the rock and prepare to lift it up. But first why not troll them a little, by acting like I'm struggling hehe.

"Hmp, urg, ah, its heavy.", I pretend. "Just kidding."

I lift up the rock with one hand and everyone, including the doctors, dropped their jaws. I might be weakened after my soul repaired, but that doesn't mean I lost all my powers that I got from the notebook completely.

"So. Can I go home now?", I smiled at them. "I'm taking that as a yes since you guys are silent"

1 hour later

Alright, I'm done gathering my belongings, time to go home. As I head out to the hospital front gate to leave a young woman who looks like she's 19 bump into me and we both fell down on top of another. I was on top and she's on the bottom.

I know what you are thinking, but I'm still underage in this life. I swear to god that top and bottom thing isn't that dirty thoughts you guys are thinking of.

Our eyes stare at each other for long time. Her face was as red as a rose. My heart was beating so fast. What is this feeling? Even though this is the first time we've met, I've felt like we had known each other for a long time already.

"Um. Excuse me, but can you get off me? I'm in a hurry.", she shyly said.

"Um,uh yeah, my bad, sorry. Let me help you up.", I said as I stand up along with her.

"Oh crap, I'm late! I need to go.", She said and then turn back and run.

"Hey! I didn't get your name!", I asked.

"My name is Tracy Long! I'm a Pediatric Intern at this hospital!", she replied.

A Pediatric Intern huh. Quite interesting, I'll remember your name Tracy Long. Oh shit, its already this late. I need to go home and prepare.

When I got home, my mother hug me and cried. She must have thought I'm gone for good. I hugged her back and told her a fake story I made up about me having seizure attack again(I used to have epilepsy) and hurt my head because of the damage my head receives when I fell down and hit my head onto a rock so I got into a coma. Ah the classic K-drama tragic story is definitely useful when you needed it.

"Mom, I'm hungry. What's for dinner?", I asked.

"I knew you were coming home so I made your favorite. Broiled Pork Belly and Meat-stuffed Bitter Melon Soup.", she replied.

After eating dinner, I pretend to tell my mom that I'm going to brush my teeth and go to bed early because I have to meet the principal of the academy(my aunt) to talk about my accident. When I see all the light turn off, I grabbed Eclipse, escaped through my room window and head toward the haunted forest.

When I reach the forest, I could sense a heavy amount of Yin Qi. Looks like the place where people kill themselves is the right choice. Lets start cultivating. I know no ones here, but to be safe I need to put up a barrier. I opened the notebook and wrote..

"During the amount of time that Terry Li cultivates, a barrier will protect him from harm and made him invisible in everyone eyes."

Now I'm all set, lets start with the Death Enlightment Sutra. I read through the book, to my suprise I easiy remember everything that in it within seconds.

"Living with sufferings, Dying with honor"

"Heaven rejects, Underworld accepts"

"Gods turning back, Demons reach out"

"Forgiving the one you who wronged you is a sin, Killing them is a merits"

"If there's no joy in living, There won't be sadness when dying"

"Defy Heavens, Worship Underworld"

"I shall become the Demon that defy heaven, rather than accepting Heaven itself"

While cultivating this sutra, I feel that the Yin Qi is entering my non-stop, the power is flowing through me. 5th stage of Yin Qi-Capturing realm reached. Now I have the physical strength of 200 lbs and my leg has also enhanced therefore my speed has increases. Its time to practice the Air-Shattering Palm.

Once again, I memorize the technique with ease.

"Air carries life, Hurricanes causes destruction"

"Absorb air, releasing breathe"

"Releasing air, releasing destruction"

"Shattering air, shattering life"

Gather the wind into the palm of my hands, while controlling my breathe. I pulled back my arm with the wind and push it out in an instant. The amount of wind blast out from my hands has destroyed 3 trees and a punch from my hands can leave a mark on the biggest tree. This is the power of a demonic cultivator. Wait since I'm the reincarnation of the Demon Ancestor and also the first person to cultivate demonic arts on Earth, doesn't this makes me the Grandmaster Of Demonic Cultivation like Wei Wuxian from Mo Dao Zu Shi. This..is..so..AWESOME.

The sun is coming up, I have to go home or else mom will be scared when she doesn't see me.

Dark Light just you wait, I'll murder all of you like I did to Doggy..I mean Daguael.

And that fire incident that has happening around town, I need to investigate it. Who could be behind this.....

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