StarryUnderworld
Well, the theme of this novel is very fun, I personally love the idea of jumping in my favorite animes with overwhelming power and just playing around. But there is one killer flaw in the novel for me that makes me a bit sad, that flaw is the rushed nondescriptive feeling to the chapters. I get the feeling that I'm hearing a quick story from a friend during break time. I honestly love the thematic but the complete lack of consistency in the description and progression of the story disappoints me. I believe that if the author is willing to backtrack and redo this novel using these chapters as a basis or a skeleton and from them work a more complete body for the story, then this novel could become one of the best fanfictions I have ever seen since this marvelous approach at the thematic is rarely seen done right.
*Author trying to give honest review. Shamless author that tries to be honest.Writing stability is not that high as i write this story for fun.For world background,I am leaching off of other anime worlds so...yea.English is my first language so mistakes would be kept to a bare minimum (I often reread and edit chapters to remove el mistakes).If there is any please point it out to improve the quality of the novel.For story,I have things planed out for the first world so it should be alright.The story will be improving(I hope) so stay tuned for that i guess.
for those who want to rate this fanfic so low pls rethink what you are doing this is the last legacy of pass away bullied victim. and here the last note of the author that got removed (https://wuxia world.world/random-fanfic-about-anime-with-a-system/chapter-129-ending-note-for-the-direction-of-the-story-note-1153541748916178) pls remove all space between wuxia world.
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Standard wish fulfillment fan fiction. If you want to place yourself in the shoes of an outrageously overpowered character in a setting that has no real rhyme nor reason then you'll probably enjoy it. Nothing in the story irked or irritated me it's just more of the same. Writing quality - 3 stars. It is just about at the average level of writing for this site. Some mistakes in grammar etc but nothing unforgivable. Stability of updates 5 stars. Looking at the TOC the chapters seem to get released at a rather impressive rate. Story development and world background - 1 star each. They are just recycled more or less from the original piece of work and other standard reincarnation/wish fulfillment/system settings. Character design - 2 stars. I somewhat enjoyed some of the traits of the MC but the characters, including the MC, are basically the same reasons as story development and world background.
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