Reviews of Queen of Hogwarts (GxG)

MC's weird. I feel like looking at a manchild with strong inheritant powers just because she was born with it. She can blame slytherins and purebloods for descriminating all she wants but she's doing the same thing. In this case, she's even worse. Slytherin kids do it because of their parents' influence and pureblood society's beliefs. They needed to fit in the society. She's doing it because she likes stomping on others. Another thing is, there's nothing attractive about the protagonist. Other narcissist MCs would trash the arrogant people in a funny way while this one keeps saying the same dumb line " I'm queen so obey me." Her so called 'flirting' towards girls is just...it felt more like harassment for some reason. None of the adults seem to like MC, but obeying her because.. she has strong powers, i guess...? The story seems to be in a society ruled by females and men are working under them obediently.. Atleast that's the vibe I'm getting from this whole fanfic. I apologise if it's not intentional but it is what it is. I'm not saying you shouldn't write stories like these but be careful with it. Most reading here are braindead guys like me and unless the storyline is very good and protagonist is quite charismatic(despite her narcissistic tendencies), your fanfic wouldn't get attractions since nobody wants to watch some lunatic girl stomping on arrogant guys while calling herself a queen (Except masochists who want to get stomped by the 'queen' )

I’m just here to give you good review and say how much i love this. Please continue to do this fine piece of work and thank you in place of everyone who gets their inner wish fulfilled.

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Writing Quality (5 Stars): I feel like the writing Quality is very good. I cant really tell you if the characters in this novel are similar to what they are in canon Harry Potter since I have never read or seen any Harry Potter. The MC is refreshing a lot of stories now have villian MCs or Neutral and while that isn't a problem there are just so many that they start to get boring but this MC is just Herself she doesn't try to be Evil nor Good nor does she stay Neutral she just does what she wants because she is a Queen. Stability of Updates (5): It's not dropped after 6 chapters that's more than most. Story Development (4): Not much to say about it. Character Design (4): Again Not much to say. World Background (3): I don't like the school setting other then that it's fine I guess.

Honestly I am very new to this app, and just stumbled upon your book, I'm deep into 20 Chapters and I will say that I have enjoyed it I got sucked right in, I honestly almost put it down after seeing how arrogant MC was and i didn't like that, but after reading further, and laughing at the comments other ppl made, I'm excited for more character development and I have to remind myself she is a child, and seeing her get all excited over something new showed that even more! after this I'll read the frozen one you made since i realized that i read this in the wrong order lol

I liked it. but it just felt weird? idk it felt a little bit forced. it was good though -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------