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MC's weird. I feel like looking at a manchild with strong inheritant powers just because she was born with it. She can blame slytherins and purebloods for descriminating all she wants but she's doing the same thing. In this case, she's even worse. Slytherin kids do it because of their parents' influence and pureblood society's beliefs. They needed to fit in the society. She's doing it because she likes stomping on others. Another thing is, there's nothing attractive about the protagonist. Other narcissist MCs would trash the arrogant people in a funny way while this one keeps saying the same dumb line " I'm queen so obey me." Her so called 'flirting' towards girls is just...it felt more like harassment for some reason. None of the adults seem to like MC, but obeying her because.. she has strong powers, i guess...? The story seems to be in a society ruled by females and men are working under them obediently.. Atleast that's the vibe I'm getting from this whole fanfic. I apologise if it's not intentional but it is what it is. I'm not saying you shouldn't write stories like these but be careful with it. Most reading here are braindead guys like me and unless the storyline is very good and protagonist is quite charismatic(despite her narcissistic tendencies), your fanfic wouldn't get attractions since nobody wants to watch some lunatic girl stomping on arrogant guys while calling herself a queen (Except masochists who want to get stomped by the 'queen' )

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Queen of Hogwarts (GxG)

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Hi, decent review, but some of the points of the story seemed to have been misinderstood by you, let me adress them. 1. She wasn't born with powers, she has been reincarnated and that reincarnation wasn't normal, I don't want to give spoilers, but she worked hard for almost everything she had and the reincarnation gave her the 'magic' of HP, since there was no such thing in her original place. (Everything else is dangerously close to spoiler area, so I will leave it here). 2. The 'manchild' and her always saying 'I'm a Queen' points. I feel like it should be obvious, me constantly writing about her playing games, being 'bored' and saying such seemingly immature statements all the time, but here's the gist of it, with some added spoilers, I guess. She is like this because she never got to be a 'normal' child, since very youmg age she was bred, taught, beaten, trained to be a Battle Queen, a Queen for war. And as a Queen, she'd get anything she so pleases without failure and at any moment, so eventually she got annoyed with many things and got in a habit of saying 'I'm a Queen' repeatedly, because she'd refuse something only to be ignored and continously pestered with excuses like 'You're a Queen, Lady Crimson you only deserve the best, so take it' and etc. And she used it against them, saying 'I am a Queen, so what part of a Queen saying 'no' does your stupid head not understand'. 3. She's neither blaming nor discriminating against Slytherins or anybody else, I have no idea where you even see the 'comparison', this oneis simple, she doesn't care for such trivial matters and insignificant people, if they don't get in her way, they can do what they want, Draco likes going for Hermione a lot, so that's why he has a tiny 'target' on his head. So as I said the Queen doesn'r care for anybody, she sees herself as a higher stature and that's only a fact. 4. The 'flirting' point. I won't say much here, because this zone is laid the most with spoiler traps. But she hasn't been flirting with the girls yet, just being herself and having conversations, remember, in actuality she is a grown up adult, cause of the reincarnation, she isn't just going to go, hey Moon, let's kiss, bang, have dates and etc. They are still 'kids' growing up and maturing, so she will wait for them for a little while before she goes in on them. 5. The society ruled by women to 'stomp' men point. As I said the Queen s doesn't descriminate, everybody is equals to her, mind you she sees them as way below her, but all of them are equal to each other, pretty sure the Prologue and Chapter 1st showed this clearly, you know when she trash talked and put other girls in their spot... So that is how thinga will be for the future, be it girl, old, guy, young, nobody is going to stop her from 'stomping' on them. 6. Adults not liking her? There's literally kore adults that liker as of the moment than kids and students, Snape liked her, Filtwick liked her, Charity liked her, Albus and Moody (The real one) like her, the only adult that doesn'y like her yet is McGongall, not gonna lie this point of yours made no sense whatsoever, I felt like you've read some other story. 7. Now the attractive point is all to the eye of the beholder, that's your own preference and opinion. 8. And most important of them all, the time in the story has passed only several days... So, charcter growth doesn't happen in one hour, just like Harry, Hermione, Ron grew over different school years and over the war and different battles and moments of loss. So wi The Queen, she will grow and change over time, little by little, sometimes because of herself, cause she will need to and mainly because of the girls. So, buddy, thank you for reading, reviewing and hopefullt you enjoyed some of it. Here's hoping you stick around for the future of the Queen, maybe you will even start liking her eventually. Bye!!!

Crimson_Lust
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Oh and Albus isn't obeying her (Nobody is at the moment, except maybe her house elf Etera) Albus allows so much of her antics, because there is something he needs from her, they have a deal made, but that is very far into the future.

Crimson_Lust:Hi, decent review, but some of the points of the story seemed to have been misinderstood by you, let me adress them. 1. She wasn't born with powers, she has been reincarnated and that reincarnation wasn't normal, I don't want to give spoilers, but she worked hard for almost everything she had and the reincarnation gave her the 'magic' of HP, since there was no such thing in her original place. (Everything else is dangerously close to spoiler area, so I will leave it here). 2. The 'manchild' and her always saying 'I'm a Queen' points. I feel like it should be obvious, me constantly writing about her playing games, being 'bored' and saying such seemingly immature statements all the time, but here's the gist of it, with some added spoilers, I guess. She is like this because she never got to be a 'normal' child, since very youmg age she was bred, taught, beaten, trained to be a Battle Queen, a Queen for war. And as a Queen, she'd get anything she so pleases without failure and at any moment, so eventually she got annoyed with many things and got in a habit of saying 'I'm a Queen' repeatedly, because she'd refuse something only to be ignored and continously pestered with excuses like 'You're a Queen, Lady Crimson you only deserve the best, so take it' and etc. And she used it against them, saying 'I am a Queen, so what part of a Queen saying 'no' does your stupid head not understand'. 3. She's neither blaming nor discriminating against Slytherins or anybody else, I have no idea where you even see the 'comparison', this oneis simple, she doesn't care for such trivial matters and insignificant people, if they don't get in her way, they can do what they want, Draco likes going for Hermione a lot, so that's why he has a tiny 'target' on his head. So as I said the Queen doesn'r care for anybody, she sees herself as a higher stature and that's only a fact. 4. The 'flirting' point. I won't say much here, because this zone is laid the most with spoiler traps. But she hasn't been flirting with the girls yet, just being herself and having conversations, remember, in actuality she is a grown up adult, cause of the reincarnation, she isn't just going to go, hey Moon, let's kiss, bang, have dates and etc. They are still 'kids' growing up and maturing, so she will wait for them for a little while before she goes in on them. 5. The society ruled by women to 'stomp' men point. As I said the Queen s doesn't descriminate, everybody is equals to her, mind you she sees them as way below her, but all of them are equal to each other, pretty sure the Prologue and Chapter 1st showed this clearly, you know when she trash talked and put other girls in their spot... So that is how thinga will be for the future, be it girl, old, guy, young, nobody is going to stop her from 'stomping' on them. 6. Adults not liking her? There's literally kore adults that liker as of the moment than kids and students, Snape liked her, Filtwick liked her, Charity liked her, Albus and Moody (The real one) like her, the only adult that doesn'y like her yet is McGongall, not gonna lie this point of yours made no sense whatsoever, I felt like you've read some other story. 7. Now the attractive point is all to the eye of the beholder, that's your own preference and opinion. 8. And most important of them all, the time in the story has passed only several days... So, charcter growth doesn't happen in one hour, just like Harry, Hermione, Ron grew over different school years and over the war and different battles and moments of loss. So wi The Queen, she will grow and change over time, little by little, sometimes because of herself, cause she will need to and mainly because of the girls. So, buddy, thank you for reading, reviewing and hopefullt you enjoyed some of it. Here's hoping you stick around for the future of the Queen, maybe you will even start liking her eventually. Bye!!!
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Crimson_Lust:Hi, decent review, but some of the points of the story seemed to have been misinderstood by you, let me adress them. 1. She wasn't born with powers, she has been reincarnated and that reincarnation wasn't normal, I don't want to give spoilers, but she worked hard for almost everything she had and the reincarnation gave her the 'magic' of HP, since there was no such thing in her original place. (Everything else is dangerously close to spoiler area, so I will leave it here). 2. The 'manchild' and her always saying 'I'm a Queen' points. I feel like it should be obvious, me constantly writing about her playing games, being 'bored' and saying such seemingly immature statements all the time, but here's the gist of it, with some added spoilers, I guess. She is like this because she never got to be a 'normal' child, since very youmg age she was bred, taught, beaten, trained to be a Battle Queen, a Queen for war. And as a Queen, she'd get anything she so pleases without failure and at any moment, so eventually she got annoyed with many things and got in a habit of saying 'I'm a Queen' repeatedly, because she'd refuse something only to be ignored and continously pestered with excuses like 'You're a Queen, Lady Crimson you only deserve the best, so take it' and etc. And she used it against them, saying 'I am a Queen, so what part of a Queen saying 'no' does your stupid head not understand'. 3. She's neither blaming nor discriminating against Slytherins or anybody else, I have no idea where you even see the 'comparison', this oneis simple, she doesn't care for such trivial matters and insignificant people, if they don't get in her way, they can do what they want, Draco likes going for Hermione a lot, so that's why he has a tiny 'target' on his head. So as I said the Queen doesn'r care for anybody, she sees herself as a higher stature and that's only a fact. 4. The 'flirting' point. I won't say much here, because this zone is laid the most with spoiler traps. But she hasn't been flirting with the girls yet, just being herself and having conversations, remember, in actuality she is a grown up adult, cause of the reincarnation, she isn't just going to go, hey Moon, let's kiss, bang, have dates and etc. They are still 'kids' growing up and maturing, so she will wait for them for a little while before she goes in on them. 5. The society ruled by women to 'stomp' men point. As I said the Queen s doesn't descriminate, everybody is equals to her, mind you she sees them as way below her, but all of them are equal to each other, pretty sure the Prologue and Chapter 1st showed this clearly, you know when she trash talked and put other girls in their spot... So that is how thinga will be for the future, be it girl, old, guy, young, nobody is going to stop her from 'stomping' on them. 6. Adults not liking her? There's literally kore adults that liker as of the moment than kids and students, Snape liked her, Filtwick liked her, Charity liked her, Albus and Moody (The real one) like her, the only adult that doesn'y like her yet is McGongall, not gonna lie this point of yours made no sense whatsoever, I felt like you've read some other story. 7. Now the attractive point is all to the eye of the beholder, that's your own preference and opinion. 8. And most important of them all, the time in the story has passed only several days... So, charcter growth doesn't happen in one hour, just like Harry, Hermione, Ron grew over different school years and over the war and different battles and moments of loss. So wi The Queen, she will grow and change over time, little by little, sometimes because of herself, cause she will need to and mainly because of the girls. So, buddy, thank you for reading, reviewing and hopefullt you enjoyed some of it. Here's hoping you stick around for the future of the Queen, maybe you will even start liking her eventually. Bye!!!