LuxVonDeux
The protagonist is so powerful the story has no meaning. It might be salvageable if there was anything else worthwhile in this story but none of the characters have any personality or meaningful character interaction and there's no real plot to speak of. The protagonist just goes around collecting powers for the sake of collecting powers and isn't even using them, considering his family randomly dies for no reason. You are basically an all powerful god that is always getting stronger and you can't even be bothered to put any protections on your only family? It's dumb and contrived so that the protagonist can wander around other worlds making thoughtless actions with nothing to tie him down.
At the time of this review, it is on its 36th chapter I can sum this novel up in one word, comfortable. Like a warm blanket, not in a lazy writer way. Unlike most Op Mc novels the author doesn't focus too much on the fights but mostly on the connections. There's no walking around obstacles as Mc deals with trouble swiftly before going back to his identity as a boyfriend/mate It did admittedly start with power struggle being the main premise but recent chapters move closer towards the slice of life. I like it cause it a nice read to rest your brain after reading all the plot-twisting novels. Thank You don't drop
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I quite like this fanfic, it has all the things I enjoy in a story and mc; op mc, romance, world travel, comedy, beatdowns, mc pulling weeds at the roots. I like that one of the mcโs main love interests is Ophis, it is not often that I see that. Usually she is made into a little sister or something. So that is somewhat unique. All things considered, I really like this story and hope that it continues for a long time.
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I'm gonna be honest. This story might seem to most as not that great. To me, this was the story that really brought me into certain concepts. I didn't even know what a CYOA (Choose Your Own Adventure) was. Nor did I know about Worm (and its God like CYOA's) and Essence Meta. I myself started to write a dxd story. Although there many reasons why, this was one of my biggest inspirations for it. Although the language quality isn't exactly EX-rank, I could still enjoy it. It's a shame it's ending now, but all good things must come to an end. Thanks for writing this story [even if it hasn't updated for at least a year]!
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